Envy

envy is self waste building traits that block our gifts while false thoughts rub truth erased each is no other - our own blessings wait pre-placed or they sad-fade envy clad ... CayCay Jennings October 27, 2018

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/14/2018 11:06:00 AM

Hi Cay Cay, Envy is a disease.! Greeks wear an evil eye, to ward off envy. if you send me your postal address I will send you one as it is really tiny and can easily be put into an envelope. Oh so true are these words. oxox, Jennifer.

Susan Palli

Date: 11/7/2018 1:00:00 PM

Well done, CayCay.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/3/2018 9:31:00 PM

Words of wisdom in this choka, CayCay. Excellent! ~ gw

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/28/2018 10:43:00 AM

"Each is no other" Wonderful CayCay, my very best wishes...

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/28/2018 12:19:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie. Appreciate you ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2018 10:37:00 AM

very well crafted choka, my dear friend. I chose anger. have not posted it yet. I am glad you did a short one. The judge did not say if there was a limit on stanzas. I guess that is why I see some really long ones. Feeling such relief since last week!!

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/28/2018 12:18:00 PM

Oh, honey - I really am trying to carve out some time to catch up with you. I so want that to happen. Glad you enjoyed what I think is my first choka, but especially glad to read the word, 'relief'. Love you ... CayCay

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/27/2018 3:30:00 PM

So true Caycay. We each have our own unique gifts to share. Envy is a waste of time. Well done! Best of luck in the contest. xxoo : )

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/27/2018 11:23:00 PM

Hey, been missing you, thinking of you daily. Good to see you occupied with Soup. Hope to do the ring, ring thing soon, soonest. Thanks for your poem-concurrence, great minds and all that. Love ... CayCay