Entwined


his kiss haunted her, howled at her, it edged through the crowd
just to daunt at her, this was a cold she had never known, blown
winds through creaky shutters, shuttered thoughts of fireside talks 
and walks, his lips able to do the impossible, possibly taking from 
her the one thing she knew to be pure, her warmth;

she panicked with frenzy, her body now a clock, wound tight, full
of fright, never having felt these waves, slaves to his hands, as they 
ran everywhere within her soul, paralyzed with suspense, tense, as
her insatiate desire for velvet touches grew anew, her eyes closed,
as the conquest pursued, locking in her memory, this glory, this
story, as if it were the last one she'd be allowed to have in this life;

her body trembled, desire assembled, as he admired the alluring 
contour of her silhouette, sweeping across her skin so soft, with the 
lightest touch of persuasion, perfection soon, a union of bodies 
abound, found within this moment of two into one, she needed to
find him, a whim of mercy, free from inhibition, falling deeper and
deeper, into every heartbeat, he knew he could destroy her with his
touch, touching her with only his trust, he prepared to forgive her
sensations as they demanded more and more of him, here, with her;

then they climbed to the canopy to see the sun together, their hands 
locked, the rush of rays exploded their worlds, weeping willows of 
emotion covered the bridge formed between their eyes, glued to one 
another, gazes gazing, lofty and full of love, an expression of silence, 
forever etched, echoes in space, jumping stars, eternal and free, 
dreaming;   

finally, falling blindly from the deepest canyons in the winter sky,
tears of joy, jumping off the cliffs into pools of warm water, tranquil,
splashing passion onto walls, painted brushstrokes of temptation, 
wondering how could they duplicate this moment again, he whispered
into her ear the sweetest words she loved to hear, then he kissed her, 
again, and again it began, their worlds bound to the everlasting end;  


February 8, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 7:53 PM
You may miss some comments from people who have to immediately find their love and run into the bedroom. Not kidding. And the poetic way you delivered erotica is nothing short of WOW. Was frowning just a bit, very tad, making sense of 1st stanza structure, then semi-colons enlightened and enhanced the heat of your pen. Nice touch from my perspective. Impressive! I congratulate you and wish you all the best ... CayCay (I talked a lot because my man is at the store. Kidding?)
Jameson Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 5:51 PM
This is a wonderful comment, CayCay-- I can only hope my words compel others to live out their passions...in anyway that might bring them joy ;) Thank you, though, for the feedback on the writing in addition-- glad the eloquence was able to shine through. Appreciate the comments, have a wonderful night. sam
Smith Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 6:29 AM
Brilliant Sam, congratulations on the win...
Jameson Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 2:05 PM
Thank you, Charlie-- much appreciated.
Capitano Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 4:30 AM
Superb Sam, so passionate! Congrats on your win.
Jameson Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 2:05 PM
Thank you, Phil-- I appreciate the pat and the feedback. Have a great day.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Hi Sam, big congratulations and a 7 to you on your superlative top-of-the-class win! This beautiful romantic piece is so very deserving of this honor! Best wishes. Pandita
Jameson Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 1:57 PM
Thank you, Pandita-- so nice of you to drop in with your kind words. I appreciate your feedback on the work-- it feels nice to know that perhaps the verse offers just a few moments of bliss when others might read it :) Have a wonderful day!
Hamilton Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Sam, what an amazing write, 30/30 so a perfect poem, could find no deficiencies. Thank you so much for submitting this marvelous poem, a7 and a fave! Very worthy winner!
Jameson Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Thank you, John-- I'm grateful for the placement and happy the work was able to strike a few chords with your vision. I appreciate the kind feedback as well-- I really enjoyed writing this piece at the time so I'm glad to dust it off for another day in the sun :) Thanks again, take care!
A   Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 1:16 AM
once again, thank you for the kind reply
A   Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 11:42 AM
Sam, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
Jameson Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Thank you, Linda, for your continued support on the work, as always :) It is very much appreciated.
Inman Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Great write Sam! The perfect amount of beauty, desire, passion and imagery combined into a very well written piece.
Jameson Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Thank you, James. Those are very kind remarks, I truly appreciate them. I'm glad you enjoyed the work, it was a joy to write it. Have a wonderful day my friend.
Gentry Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on your win with this amazingly sensual verse!
Jameson Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Thank you, Susan. I very much enjoyed writing this piece, I'm glad you found some inspiration within the words. Have a great day!
Onclaud Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:18 AM
packed with mystery!.. congrats on your top spot, sam..huggs
Jameson Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 7:13 AM
mystery always and forever entwined :) thanks for the praise on the work, Nette...means a lot, have a wonderful day.
Mcclain Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Hey Sam, Congrats on your 1st place finish. Excellent write. Cheers, Brian
Jameson Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 7:11 AM
I appreciate that, Brian. Thank you for dropping by with a handshake. Have a great day my friend.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:01 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse Sam..
Jameson Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:04 PM
Thank you Dr., I really enjoyed creating this piece, very glad it was able to connect. Thanks for your warm comments my friend.
Scars Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 6:50 PM
Sam, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
Jameson Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Laura. I truly appreciate your kind remarks. Have a wonderful night!
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