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Entwined

Linked together like a strong rope leading into your arms Interlaced, soft as feathers floating around tight like yarn Your homemade blanket knitted by great grandma's hands We must lay down together for I can no longer stand My heart has always had a lock but with you I'm disarmed Linked together like a strong rope leading into your arms My breath taken away from looking into those lovely eyes Your breath taken away as you realize I've lost my disguise. Beliefs in our future given from the good Lord above A firm foundation based on communication and love Linked together like a strong rope leading me into your arms I've always been intrigued by your little romantic charms. No more complications for we are free from dramatic play Come here, sweetheart, I can't handle another frantic delay As our bodies lay entwined together I am free from harm Linked together like a strong rope leading into your arms ~Date Written : February 7, 2016~ ~For the contest, Entwined, sponsor, Broken Wings~

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Date: 2/28/2016 4:28:00 AM
Beautifully entwined! So very warmly romantic, Laura. A well-tackled quatern which truly merited this lovely win...congratulations! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/24/2016 12:17:00 PM
Beautiful imagery of 'entwined' love, Laura. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:14:00 AM
Laura, this is sweet and beautiful. Great choice of form, it enhances the feeling of the poem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/23/2016 10:11:00 AM
Thank you James :) -luloo
Date: 2/23/2016 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Quatern! Excellent.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/23/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)-luloo
Date: 2/23/2016 3:59:00 AM
The details of the entwined proceedings captivates a reader... Congratulations.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/23/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thank you Probir :) -luloo
Date: 2/23/2016 12:19:00 AM
beautifully crafted, lou... best congrats on your award!..huggs
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/23/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Nette:)-luloo
Date: 2/22/2016 10:04:00 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse Laura.. u hv captured real essence of love..
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:04:00 PM
passion and love make a powerful mixture,to be in love and be lovers is its own paradise
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/14/2016 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Frederic very much :) *smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/7/2016 4:48:00 PM
Laura, I absolutely love reading your poetry!
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/7/2016 5:07:00 PM
You are so sweet Carol, thank you :)*smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/7/2016 4:47:00 PM
Beautiful flowing quatern LuLoo good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/7/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thank you lady Jan :) *Smiles* *hugs* -luloo

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