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poem written for and submitted to Hilo Poet's

3 Rhymed, 3 Unrhymed Senyrus Contest, 4/21/2024

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ a family tree roots run deep connect you, me cherished history whether far or near bound by love year after year family so dear we share dreams, hope, fears love endures throughout the years each year, bond endears differences emerge unwilling to compromise silence is our shield silence lingers on misunderstanding simmers breaks family bond souls remain entwined bound by love, yet diverging family par'dox

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Hilo Poet

Date: 5/1/2024 1:28:00 AM

Surprised by your entry into the Senryu contest, and topped that off with my compliments, Sara, for your righteous placement my friend. With my thanks, Aloha, William.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/1/2024 5:42:00 PM

thank you, dear William. Your contest was a challenge but I enjoyed it. Thanks for your complimentary words and for my placement. Color me grateful and delighted, Sara

David Crandall

Date: 4/25/2024 6:22:00 PM

Nice poem Sara, I guess the paradox is common experience, roots, and love, with unique individuals and stances. It seems like a lot of poems, like yours here, remind me of the common experience that all of us on earth have - a comforting feeling, that makes me feel part of everything.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/25/2024 6:26:00 PM

thanks for your lovely and uplifting comments, David. I agree. We all have a shared humanity, and I believe poetry unveils that for us. Hope you feel a part of the PS community. Have a great evening, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/22/2024 5:02:00 AM

Wonderfully woven in emotive feelings and love of family. Much to gleam here about life--succinctly conveyed, Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/22/2024 5:23:00 AM

thanks, Vijay. Your remarks and kind words are always appreciated. Wishing you a pleasant day, Sara

Don Iannone

Date: 4/21/2024 12:51:00 PM

Hi Sara, Enjoyed this very much.Reminds me that there is a duality in family ties—roots that run deep, connecting and supporting each member, but also highlighting the tension and silence that can drive family members apart. It reflects the enduring love that holds families together, even as misunderstandings and unspoken differences create rifts, leading to the paradox of connection and separation within a family tree. Cheers, Don

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/21/2024 5:54:00 PM

thank you, Don, for dropping by. I appreciate the depth and insight in your comments. Funny how resilience can be a positive but resilience can become stubbornness; it's that stubbornness that creates the rifts and the paradox. Thanks for sharing. I'm grateful for you and your visits. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 4/21/2024 10:52:00 AM

I can relate big time sara have no contact with my (ex) sister since 2015. hugs jan xx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/21/2024 5:52:00 PM

thanks for your visit, Jan, and for sharing. Sorry you and your (ex) sister no longer communicate. That's a hard reality. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/21/2024 8:33:00 AM

Dear Sara, I have seen firsthand the misery that may result from letting disputes simmer and grow, so I can relate to your devotion and love of blood. found it entertaining. My best wishes for the contest.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/21/2024 5:51:00 PM

thanks for visiting, dear Sotto. I'm glad you found my poem spot on in that some families are highly dysfunctional and hostilities abound...it's unfortunate. Thanks for your well wishes for the contest. Have a pleasant evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/21/2024 7:48:00 AM

Yes, family does hold some people together but separates some for one reason or another. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/21/2024 5:49:00 PM

thanks for dropping by, Sara K. I appreciate your supportive comments. Have a blessed evening, hugs, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/21/2024 7:43:00 AM

A grounded poem that relates the importance of families. I enjoyed this read. Good luck with the contest.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/21/2024 5:48:00 PM

aww, thank you, Hilda. You're always so kind and positive about my poems. Grateful for you and your visits. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 4/21/2024 7:00:00 AM

Family love should run as deep as the roots of a tree. Sara, I admire your loyalty and love of family, and have witnessed the sadness caused by misunderstandings that are allowed to linger and fester. Pitiable, that scenario.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/21/2024 5:48:00 PM

thanks for dropping by, Lin, and for your kind words about my loyalty and love of family. I, too, have witnessed sadness caused by misunderstandings that linger. My husband's family has some of those qualities. It is sad. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara