Entre Nous

Facets' twine undiscovered within each breath, "Between us" unity searches desolate streets... ____________________ Contest ~ "What You Will" Form ~ Unrhymed Couplet

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 10:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "What You Will"contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2011 8:37:00 PM

Congratulations, Rick, on a unique couplet win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/11/2011 1:02:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your 3rd place win in Brian's contest .. fabulous write my friend.. so honored to be sharing this winners list with u luv..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/11/2011 12:36:00 PM

Tres bien, mon amie! Congratulation!

Elaine George

Date: 5/11/2011 11:20:00 AM

Very profound, Rick. many congrats on your SECOND PLACE WIN. Lainie

Kash Poet

Date: 5/11/2011 10:03:00 AM

beautiful write.Congrats Rick on your 3rd place win.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/7/2011 11:37:00 AM

Very powerful message, Rick. As long as things remain "between us," there will never be unity. I'm sure this will do well in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/5/2011 10:26:00 PM

Awesome! So well written, with this single couplet! Great imagery, gives your message a clear picture. Good luck in the contest. Caroline.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2011 10:16:00 AM

power-packed, rick... your write is haunting and so breathtaking! winning wishes! :) huggs, nette