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Pink the sunset which filtered through the leaves
to burnish your skin on one afternoon,
when fireflies glittered like radiant weaves
  
Vanishing in the grass. We knew that soon
those ebony clouds gathering would force
us to flee the glade...yet a birdsong’s tune
 
Enticed us to stay, stay madly on course,
dare the oncoming rainfall ...and a smile
enlivened your face, as the insolent force
 
Of lightning crackled. ”Let’s wait up a while,”
you gasped, till we fondled everywhere;
while a conniving star reeled to beguile.

A wildcat rushed out and paused low to stare,
While we huddled unclad ... too close to care.


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10/31/2015



 

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Date: 11/11/2015 7:40:00 PM
I must study Terza Rima. A beautiful poem, Nette - I've come to expect no less, you have set your bar very high in my humble opinion. Yours poems consistently touch me ... CayCay
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win on this fine poem!!
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Date: 11/2/2015 3:38:00 PM
Oh the times and places spent..congratulations on your win my poetic friend.
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Date: 11/2/2015 2:01:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful nette congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/2/2015 12:22:00 PM
Hi nette: A beautiful love story and a great win.
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Date: 11/2/2015 11:59:00 AM
Congrats on your great win, Nette!
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Date: 11/2/2015 11:45:00 AM
Nette, awesome win. SKAT
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Date: 11/2/2015 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations in your win.
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Date: 11/1/2015 4:21:00 PM
I can see why you like it so much. Do tell, what are the other two, Nette!!
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Date: 11/1/2015 4:39:00 AM
nette, you astound one with your classical poetry, and it just keeps on getting better and better. Love this, and the form too!
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Date: 10/31/2015 3:50:00 PM
Beautiful poem Nette, I too like the last line the most. Anne.
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Date: 10/31/2015 1:53:00 PM
Poetic sensuality at its best! You always wow, Nette. hugs!
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Date: 10/31/2015 11:53:00 AM
very beautifully painted nette excellent pen dear pal wishing you a lovely weekend
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Date: 10/31/2015 12:01:00 AM
Liked the last line the most. Very sensuous write! Thanks for you kind words. Peace &Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/30/2015 9:31:00 PM
Thank you Nette for your always encouraging comments.Best wishes with your creative endeavours.regards Brian
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Date: 10/30/2015 8:57:00 PM
Viva la Terza Rima! Making love outdoors in a storm... I should stop my thoughts right about there... I think this is purrrty darn sexy.
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Date: 10/30/2015 6:16:00 PM
Dear Nette Wow what a erotic sensual write here my friend, it is nature gone wild and sensual on the passionate side of humanity awesome imagery of two lovers, shedding their inhibitions and yielding unto their primitive sides, great job, been their lol won't say how though OMG, two personal thank you also for commenting on my poem also, chat with you later, cheri
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Date: 10/30/2015 5:58:00 PM
Passionate ,Sensual and Sizzling dear Nette.
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Date: 10/30/2015 4:33:00 PM
Lovely, Nette! A quick 7 and thanks for letting me know of the editing.Really enjoyed this wondrous poem!
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Date: 10/30/2015 4:20:00 PM
Darn girl! Softly sizzling; it is just a killer! That's poetic appeal, Nette. And thank you for your wishes.
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Date: 10/30/2015 4:10:00 PM
OMG! So passionate and warm with subliminal imagery. That wildcat gave this brilliant poem it's soft-raw touch. Bravo!
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