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Let's Do It, Nette Onclaud, 8/7/2026

Enthralled By Those Eyes

star brightness gambols my way
sparkle of sunshine sugar
passion like warmth of brandy
concoction that thrills
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Kitchin Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 12:25 PM
Kim, back to congratulate you on your win with your sweet romantic poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 3:30 AM
Thank you, Tania!
Kerr Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 6:32 AM
Congratulations on your absolutely wonderful win, Kim. Howard.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 6:18 PM
Thank you, Howard!
Anaya Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 6:27 PM
Like warmth of brandy, love that comparison. Belated congratulations on Poem of the day, Kim! 🌹 Cheers! 🥂
Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 6:18 PM
Thank you, Anaya!
Delaney Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 2:19 PM
Beautifully descriptive, Kim. Congrats for your POTD honor. Hugs, SuZ
M  Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 1:46 PM
Belated Congratulations Kim on POTD! Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 4:21 PM
Thank you ❤️
Hind Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 11:00 PM
congrats belated on POTD!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:38 AM
Thank you ❤️
La France Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 3:56 PM
Kim, beautifully penned, and congratulations on receiving POTD honor ⭐
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 5:47 AM
Thank you, Constance! Good to her from you ❤️
Hind Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 7:38 PM
lovely!! <3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 5:34 AM
Thank you!
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:50 PM
❤️
Wolf Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 8:33 PM
belated congrats, my friend Belated congrats, Kim! `
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:50 PM
TY ❤️
Nicole Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 8:19 PM
' sparkle of sunshine sugar. ' Such a sweet thought and so dreamy. Your words create a beautiful mood, my dear friend. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:50 PM
Glad you enjoyed the mood! Hugs ❤️
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 4:36 PM
a well deserved POTD with this one
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:49 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Buehler Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 1:41 PM
An awesome poem, Kim! Congratulations on POTD. 😄👏🌸
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:49 PM
❤️
Delegans Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 11:52 AM
Lovely poem, Kim! Congrats on winning POTD with this beautiful piece.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:49 PM
❤️
Goldsmith Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 8:44 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Enthralled By Those Eyes" write. Have a blessed weekend with your wonderful win...............
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:49 PM
❤️ TY! Be blessed!
Rodgers Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 8:14 AM
Dear Kim, Congratulations, my Friend! Like a small, steady flame, not theatrical, just insistently warm. I really think that the poem’s strength is its economy, desire arrives as a fact rather than a proclamation. It leaves me waiting for the next honest detail. Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:48 PM
Those eyes draw in their intended target and reignite when they become bedroom eyes…lol
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 6:42 AM
- Beautifully written, Kim :) - Congratulation on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:47 PM
❤️
Lawless Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 6:02 AM
ah, that "come into my web" moment....nicely done
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:47 PM
LOL…yes! TY
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 4:30 AM
ooh, la la....loved the last line! congrats on your POTD designation, dear Kim. Wishing you well 👏
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:46 PM
❤️ Glad you liked that line! TY!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 4:30 AM
ooh, la la....loved the last line! congrats on your POTD designation, dear Kim. Wishing you well 👏
George Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 4:13 AM
Eyes reflect a concoction of emotions. Beautifully written. Dear Kim, Congratulations on your POTD honor.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:46 PM
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Kitchin Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 4:07 AM
Kim, a sweet romantic poem. Congratulations on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:45 PM
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Jones Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 1:37 AM
I love that line about brandy! Congratulations on potd!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:45 PM
❤️ Glad you like that line! TY!
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August 8, 2026 at 1:35 AM
Nice and romantic Kim. Congratulations on having received Poem of the Day… Beryl 💕
Edmonds  Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 1:34 AM
Nice and romantic Kim. Congratulations on having received Poem of the Day… Beryl 💕
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