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Enraptured - Hs

a river of gold in the gloaming skies of blue ~ sunset magic charm in the twilight zone nightingale melodies please ~ moon comes out to hear stardust sprinkled coat worn by dusky night maiden ~ jealous luna stares in gloomy stillness even shadows go to sleep ~ lonely wolf cries out beauty of night sky ~ enraptured soul sigh!
29th April 2023 This is a HAIKU SONNET (invented originally by David Marshall).The basic premise of the haiku sonnet is simple: 4 3-liner haiku plus a couplet of either 5 or 7 syllables adds up to 14 lines, the same number of lines found in a sonnet. Contest: Upto 20 lines Sponsor: Sotto Poet

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Date: 5/25/2023 11:41:00 PM
what a super form - I will see if i can come up with a poem for you Jo:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/10/2023 8:15:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks likewise for this excellent example of what your contest requires. God bless you.
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Date: 5/8/2023 3:56:00 PM
This is a fantastic and clever sonnet and haiku!
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Date: 5/7/2023 7:03:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Well done, Joanna.
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Date: 5/3/2023 2:29:00 PM
Jo, your Haiku Sonnet is beautiful, I love it, congratulations on your win and thank you for the great example for your contest!
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Date: 5/3/2023 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. This is a new form to me. Looks like you had fun with it. Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 5/3/2023 10:18:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Jo ... I'm not familiar with the form - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/3/2023 7:18:00 AM
I'd never heard of this form Joanna, ill see what I can come up with. Tom
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Date: 5/3/2023 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest ...Joanna. Wonderful writting
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Date: 5/2/2023 9:22:00 PM
Joanna, Congratulations on crafting such a lovely poem that combines the elegance of poetry with the wisdom of thought.
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Date: 5/2/2023 6:30:00 AM
wow, a cool form, Joanna. I love this example for the contest
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Date: 4/30/2023 2:19:00 AM
This poem has it all. Loved the idea of a haiku sonnet.
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Date: 4/29/2023 4:53:00 AM
A Haiku Sonnet! What a great idea, and you've achieved enrapturing me with yours. So well depicted are the night's events, Jo.
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