Eve Roper Poet Tetractys

Enjoyable Recollection

breeze

uttered

a warm breath,

scooped up fluttered

leaves, stuttered disruption sounds, round, and round.


existence quintessence sputtered, muttered

Shakespeare words of

endearment

comfort

waft.




9/27/2020

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JC Brul October 12, 2020 at 5:44 PM Breathtaking piece! Every line speaks harmony.. I wish I could compose as captivating as this!

Anisha Dutta October 10, 2020 at 9:46 PM Really Enjoyable. Regards n Love.

Beata Agustin October 9, 2020 at 9:10 PM Thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours... soothing, uplifting. (Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-sponsored contest.) God bless you.

Reason A. Poteet October 7, 2020 at 5:54 AM Just love how you used these sound bites: utter, stutter, mutter, sputter. Brings to mind how a lover's heart misses the connections to his brain and mouth. Great thoughts, Eve.

Regina Mcintosh October 4, 2020 at 4:45 AM A wonderful example and a beauty too. God bless you, Gina

Constance La France October 3, 2020 at 9:11 AM Eve, beautiful poem and a great example for your contest _Constance

Jennifer Proxenos October 1, 2020 at 10:45 AM Great write Eve, your imagery is always a pleasure to observe, and to read and re-read! Hugs and blessings my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison September 28, 2020 at 6:31 AM what charming imagery Eve like your use of the repeated sound fluttered, stuttered muttered:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands September 28, 2020 at 5:35 AM Very nice Eve. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2020 at 1:07 AM - As always beautiful ... - have a lovely week, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar September 27, 2020 at 11:30 PM I love poems on the breeze. They give me a sense of elation like this wonderful poem. ~~