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Engulfing Doom

Hear the tale of a beautiful woman A story told should be forbidden She falls asleep quickly And lies in her bed neatly Beautiful colors she sees ahead... Interrupted by a mysterious view It summons her to a mountain stream She notices an aroma, intense in her dream The smell lingers on Her presence she fears does not belong Sensations felt from above her head She cannot relinquish this feeling as of yet Looks behind but her senses deny Terrified, she turns to hide The force is too strong for her to run Trying to awake, she could do none Inhaling, exhaling down her back it moves She sees it now, black, dark and absurd She knows this could only be one thing An engulfing doom, a shadow encircling her room It is a ghoul her mind conjures Trying to take her soul for sure Suddenly her phone rings, She returns from her slumber Awake and barely aware She drops the phone and looks above Realizing it is still there.... ©Holly P. Moore November 26, 2012 "Waking Up" Contest Entry

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Date: 3/21/2013 8:28:00 PM
This was so entertaining, it pulled me in and felt the fear with her. great write Holly, Blessings, Bernard
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Date: 12/13/2012 6:36:00 PM
A hard to shake dream. Congatulations Holly. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/13/2012 2:05:00 PM
Very scary one here! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/13/2012 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Waking Up" contest Holly. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2012 3:01:00 AM
Holly big congrats on your win...David
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Date: 12/13/2012 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Holly love xx
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Date: 12/12/2012 11:53:00 PM
Amazing write Holly! I love the air of mystery, in that although awake from her dream the events still follow her around -chilling. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/12/2012 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Holly! Thank you so much for your full support! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/1/2012 10:41:00 AM
wow what a powerful piece! It grips the reader and pulls them in! You are very talented!! thanks for sharing! I really like the ending of the poem it is surreal like the author can not escape this vision! I love it!!!
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Date: 11/26/2012 1:04:00 PM
OOOoooohhh....Spooky! A very intence write.It was very gripping...
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Date: 11/26/2012 6:50:00 AM
Very chilling write here holly, my best wishes too you in contest, hope it scares its way to the top of the rope... Fantastic all my love my friend Carma
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Date: 11/26/2012 1:58:00 AM
Love it Holly, very well written. - I have post you a S-mail. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2012 1:30:00 AM
Holly very well done, this is so much better....David I have just souped you..
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Date: 11/25/2012 1:39:00 PM
Chilling write! Whatever you ate before bed that night I would avoid it in the future. Hope this was a fictional poem. It was a very enjoyable read. Sweet dreams.
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Date: 11/25/2012 12:11:00 PM
soup mail....
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Date: 11/25/2012 9:47:00 AM
get the pepper spray,lol,great write Holly
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Date: 11/25/2012 8:34:00 AM
Cool piece my dear friend... well done.. love dream writes... Hugs Michael
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