Engraved

He was not impressed.
God knew the number of hairs on his head.
Did that include his beard if he ever grew one?
He would ponder this and other such anomalies of faith.
Why would a Supreme Being care about numbers,
or sparrows falling from the sky, or follicle formations?

Perhaps we were given a number at conception
engraved into our spiritual destiny?  Did the number
follow us in death, or were positions changed
by Karmic endeavor and final placements rated
by lifetime achievements or failures?

On his ninety third birthday he received a card.
It showed how many seconds, minutes, hours,
days, months and years he had lived.
He pondered the meaning and worth of such information.
How could you measure Oct 26, 1963 against any other day?
And why would you?  Was death, or life, just a numbers game?
A competition?  A Cosmic Reality Show?  A spiritual ratings contest?

He remembered fewer days as he got older.
Settled for snapshot glimpses of sunshine and snowflakes,
Nameless, yet familiar, smiles beckoning him
toward an un-numbered future.

He was not impressed
for he knew that God knew.

©2/10/2023
Writing Challenge – E Words Poetry Contest
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La France Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 9:59 AM
John, interesting poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - E Words, well done, blessings, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/story. Life makes us stronger. Wonderful questions. Love the ending. "God Knows" Have a blessed day writing away.................
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 11:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, John -
Wolf Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Haunting stuff, John.
Peck Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 4:04 PM
How many times those questions have been pondered. A thoughtful poem with a kind nod at the aging mind, and a great last line.
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