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He was not impressed. God knew the number of hairs on his head. Did that include his beard if he ever grew one? He would ponder this and other such anomalies of faith. Why would a Supreme Being care about numbers, or sparrows falling from the sky, or follicle formations? Perhaps we were given a number at conception engraved into our spiritual destiny? Did the number follow us in death, or were positions changed by Karmic endeavor and final placements rated by lifetime achievements or failures? On his ninety third birthday he received a card. It showed how many seconds, minutes, hours, days, months and years he had lived. He pondered the meaning and worth of such information. How could you measure Oct 26, 1963 against any other day? And why would you? Was death, or life, just a numbers game? A competition? A Cosmic Reality Show? A spiritual ratings contest? He remembered fewer days as he got older. Settled for snapshot glimpses of sunshine and snowflakes, Nameless, yet familiar, smiles beckoning him toward an un-numbered future. He was not impressed for he knew that God knew. ©2/10/2023 Writing Challenge – E Words Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/21/2023 9:59:00 AM
John, interesting poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - E Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/16/2023 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/story. Life makes us stronger. Wonderful questions. Love the ending. "God Knows" Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 2/15/2023 11:00:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, John -
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Date: 2/11/2023 7:38:00 PM
Haunting stuff, John.
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Date: 2/10/2023 4:04:00 PM
How many times those questions have been pondered. A thoughtful poem with a kind nod at the aging mind, and a great last line.
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