Energy

I can feel a room as if it was my skin,
the emotion swirling endlessly
a drop in tone in a voice 
the eyes narrowing.

the rise of a chest
the fall of a mood
quite moments
empty spaces
a liars glance 
between two.

I can tell if you are sad
your mask, broken
beneath my gaze 
I can tell if you lie
your tone of voice 
gives way.

I know more
of you then
me, I can see 
your energy. 

But myself I can not read
I feel my own self apathy 
an empty shell to reflect 
your sorrows and regrets.

A mirror of silver glass, 
cracked enough to pass
as a shadow of a self, 
Leftovers of someone else.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Maverick Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 10:23 AM
Really full of emotion Jeff, you have a gift in Words i feel, more practice is needed.Yet that Is true for all of us.' All the best!
Goff Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 7:57 PM
Quite intriguing my friend! Love it!
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