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Van Gogh painted this during his time as a psychiatric patient the year before he shot himself in a wheat field. Later he painted Wheatfield with Crows, evidencing perhaps differing moods transposed into a similar scene.

It was first of this image that was planned with a charcoal outline, then a large rendition done which was sent to his brother Theo, then a smaller version for his mother and sister.

 

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Without a skeleton of ash, there would be nothing - a charcoal outline, cheating the mortal coil beneath the colour. Creativity and visions carry us, just proud of the knowledge of our bones, a flicker tries always to remind us, bring us down. Today, I offset the cypress and inhale the wind. The wheat curves with fullness, forgetting too that the scythe comes soon. The clouds playful, like they haven't heard of storms, the delicate poppies swaying in tune, built to last a moment, a moment they claim fully. As my brush adds the final highlights, I start again, on a smaller canvas. Let the mood linger a while, perhaps to peter, trance-like, with the joy of now, willfully forgetting what happens when built on ash.

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Date: 1/31/2025 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, DD. Your poetic language and expression is eloquent and unforgettable. Which image or line to emphasize in this poem just isn't possible as one is as outstanding as another. Like Van Gogh's masterpieces, this is a masterpiece of poetic artistry! Inspiring! Sending you blessings. I am so glad I had to chance to read your poem. A fav!
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Date: 1/31/2025 12:26:00 PM
What a delight inducing comment Sam! Thank you :) it's quite a wonderful moment when in flow writing ekphrasis, I'm definitely glad I discovered the form. So pleased you liked it enough to fave :)
Date: 1/16/2025 8:38:00 AM
A unique, thoughtful presentation of this prompt DD & yes, we'll linger here in the mood you've created - no need for trumpets and drums, they will be born in our imagination!
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Date: 1/16/2025 11:43:00 AM
Thank you Craig - I wanted to try and ensure it was an original interpretation for your prompt. I'm delighted it made the grade :)
Date: 1/15/2025 5:08:00 AM
Dear DD, What a beautiful, reflective homage to Van Gogh’s (one of my Favs) spirit and artistry. I loved the interplay between fleeting joy and underlying fragility. Thank you for painting emotions with your words. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 1/15/2025 5:33:00 AM
Lovely to see you back Daniel, I hope all is well. There is so much to savour and feel within Van Goghs work. I really should make a concentrated effort to read his letters to his brother, but often the paint tells the story. Thank you for your kind words
Date: 1/14/2025 8:47:00 PM
Is this a drawing and two paintings of the same subject? Or visual trickery? It is a gorgeous scene.
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Date: 1/15/2025 4:09:00 AM
It's the charcoal outline for the plan, then the painting in all it's glory and then a second smaller, more quickly created version. It's quite beautiful, once all considered. Hope encapsulated.
Date: 1/14/2025 7:36:00 AM
You've nailed it again, dear dd, this is absolutely stunning and soul stirring! I love the artwork and also how your words flow in such a seamless manner as well as the imagery youv painted in the second stanza, is so impressive and how youv read it is just organic, hah! Beautiful as always, the best iv read for the prompt, and i must say, van gogh does inspire you, in such a way that makes us readers admire and feel the depth! Ah to start again as youve stated i last stanza, emanates power! A new fave for me! Just love this
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Date: 1/14/2025 9:15:00 AM
This is two faves in one day - a new high lol :) just realised organic is the opposite of artificial too :) ha - don't think there was two organics in one day though rofl. Thank you so much for the super kind attention and support you have given my work. We'll see what Craig thinks now :)
Date: 1/14/2025 4:32:00 AM
You have done Van Gogh and yourself proud with this D D. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 1/14/2025 4:42:00 AM
Aww thanks Gary, your comments always appreciated. I put a fair bit of undercurrent in this and when I stepped back I couldn't be sure if it needed the fine detail of the backstory to make sense. Thanks for your comment :)

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