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Endless Love

Rose
Blood red
I placed it
On your gravestone
As a symbol of my undying love

You departed this life far too early
I’m all alone
In the world
I miss
you 

Two Stanzas Only Contest Sponsored by Broken Wings
Double Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 syllables

07~20~16

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2016

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Kai Michael Neumann Date: 7/27/2016 3:41:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/27/2016 3:46:00 AM Thanks Kai:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/27/2016 12:30:00 AM Congratulations Jan on your win:) Lovely write:) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/27/2016 3:46:00 AM Thanks so much Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath Date: 7/26/2016 1:10:00 PM Beautifully done. Congrats on your win my friend, bl Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2016 1:13:00 PM Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith Date: 7/26/2016 11:18:00 AM Lovingly simple, congratulations Jan... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2016 12:06:00 PM Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Just James Date: 7/26/2016 8:23:00 AM Very emotive write, well done, super win and super 7! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2016 10:36:00 AM Thanks so much James:-) hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi Date: 7/26/2016 5:31:00 AM Very deep and beautiful.... Congrats Jan, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2016 7:16:00 AM Thanks so much Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser Date: 7/26/2016 12:02:00 AM Congrats on your win, Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2016 7:16:00 AM Thanks so much Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 7/25/2016 7:49:00 PM Jan, congratulations on your win, so heartbreaking . Thank you so very much for your congratulations on my poem , “Free Its Soul Bound Wild Stallion”. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2016 7:14:00 AM thanks so much Eve and I loved your poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta Date: 7/25/2016 6:59:00 PM So happy to see you on top place. Hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2016 7:13:00 AM I'm so happy too Anisha:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight Date: 7/25/2016 4:40:00 PM I knew this would be a high winner, Jan. Back to congratulate you on your win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2016 7:13:00 AM Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy Date: 7/25/2016 4:28:00 PM Congratulations on your Well-deserved win! Janice Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2016 6:15:00 PM Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 7/25/2016 4:21:00 PM Beautiful.....Congratulations Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2016 6:14:00 PM Thanks Janis-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar Date: 7/25/2016 3:28:00 PM Lovely poem Jan, you are on a roll!Congratulations! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2016 6:14:00 PM Thanks Sara I am having a winning streak this week:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior Date: 7/25/2016 3:12:00 PM Congrats! Jan on your win...do you ever stop winning lol...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2016 3:15:00 PM LOL ^WW^ I am having a good run at the moment but believe me I have an ever growing list of N/A and there are many contests that I do not enter:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars Date: 7/25/2016 3:06:00 PM Jan, I love this form you executed it well lady, congrats on your top placement in this contest :)-luloo Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2016 3:14:00 PM Thanks so much LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 7/25/2016 2:48:00 PM Congratulations to you, Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2016 3:13:00 PM Oh thanks for dropping by Lin:-) hugs jan xx

Vera Duggan Date: 7/22/2016 8:22:00 PM Hi Jan, so sad this little poem is, nicely written, take care........Vera Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/23/2016 1:30:00 AM Thanks Vera, so lovely to see you. Hope you and peter are well:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 7/21/2016 11:37:00 PM Welcome to the dark side :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/22/2016 4:38:00 AM I'm pleased to join you:-) :-) I can write serious stuff from time to time and surprise folks:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/21/2016 9:47:00 AM great idea using this form and this kind of poem for Constance. OH, I have to get busy on this one!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/21/2016 10:06:00 AM Thanks Andrea :-) hugs jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 7/21/2016 6:47:00 AM Love your work. Beautiful. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/21/2016 7:26:00 AM Thanks so much Scott I do appreciate your support:-)hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight Date: 7/21/2016 6:22:00 AM Very emotional, Jan. Your two stanzas say so much in so few words. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/21/2016 6:37:00 AM Thanks Sandra I have only discovered this form since Eve's contest and really like it:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/20/2016 5:04:00 PM this is somber yet beautiful, jan... love the whole mood of your tetractys; wow!..huggs and soupie... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/20/2016 5:05:00 PM Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2016 1:45:00 PM - Deep emotions at the grave - Beautifully written, Jan - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/20/2016 1:47:00 PM Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton Date: 7/20/2016 10:48:00 AM Stunning write Jan, I love your emotive poems the best! This form really agrees with you! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/20/2016 11:08:00 AM Thanks for the lovely comment John:-) I do try to write in styles other than humour :-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Rycroft Date: 7/20/2016 9:12:00 AM Beautiful sad and brilliant x Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/20/2016 9:15:00 AM Thanks Wendy:-) I realise I've written this form recently so may try and write another if I have time:-) hugs jan xx