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Rose Blood red I placed it On your gravestone As a symbol of my undying love You departed this life far too early I’m all alone In the world I miss you Two Stanzas Only Contest Sponsored by Broken Wings Double Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 syllables 07~20~16

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Date: 7/27/2016 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2016 3:46:00 AM
Thanks Kai:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/27/2016 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations Jan on your win:) Lovely write:)
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Date: 7/27/2016 3:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2016 1:10:00 PM
Beautifully done. Congrats on your win my friend, bl
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Date: 7/26/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2016 11:18:00 AM
Lovingly simple, congratulations Jan...
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Date: 7/26/2016 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2016 8:23:00 AM
Very emotive write, well done, super win and super 7!
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Date: 7/26/2016 10:36:00 AM
Thanks so much James:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2016 5:31:00 AM
Very deep and beautiful.... Congrats Jan, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/26/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/26/2016 12:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Jan!
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Date: 7/26/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/25/2016 7:49:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your win, so heartbreaking . Thank you so very much for your congratulations on my poem , “Free Its Soul Bound Wild Stallion”. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/26/2016 7:14:00 AM
thanks so much Eve and I loved your poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/25/2016 6:59:00 PM
So happy to see you on top place. Hugs
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Date: 7/26/2016 7:13:00 AM
I'm so happy too Anisha:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/25/2016 4:40:00 PM
I knew this would be a high winner, Jan. Back to congratulate you on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/26/2016 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/25/2016 4:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your Well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 7/25/2016 6:15:00 PM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/25/2016 4:21:00 PM
Beautiful.....Congratulations
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Date: 7/25/2016 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Janis-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/25/2016 3:28:00 PM
Lovely poem Jan, you are on a roll!Congratulations!
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Date: 7/25/2016 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Sara I am having a winning streak this week:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/25/2016 3:12:00 PM
Congrats! Jan on your win...do you ever stop winning lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:15:00 PM
LOL ^WW^ I am having a good run at the moment but believe me I have an ever growing list of N/A and there are many contests that I do not enter:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/25/2016 3:06:00 PM
Jan, I love this form you executed it well lady, congrats on your top placement in this contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thanks so much LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/25/2016 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations to you, Jan!
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:13:00 PM
Oh thanks for dropping by Lin:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/22/2016 8:22:00 PM
Hi Jan, so sad this little poem is, nicely written, take care........Vera
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2016 1:30:00 AM
Thanks Vera, so lovely to see you. Hope you and peter are well:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/21/2016 11:37:00 PM
Welcome to the dark side :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2016 4:38:00 AM
I'm pleased to join you:-) :-) I can write serious stuff from time to time and surprise folks:-):-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/21/2016 9:47:00 AM
great idea using this form and this kind of poem for Constance. OH, I have to get busy on this one!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thanks Andrea :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/21/2016 6:47:00 AM
Love your work. Beautiful.
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Date: 7/21/2016 7:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Scott I do appreciate your support:-)hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/21/2016 6:22:00 AM
Very emotional, Jan. Your two stanzas say so much in so few words. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/21/2016 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Sandra I have only discovered this form since Eve's contest and really like it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/20/2016 5:04:00 PM
this is somber yet beautiful, jan... love the whole mood of your tetractys; wow!..huggs and soupie...
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Date: 7/20/2016 5:05:00 PM
Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/20/2016 1:45:00 PM
- Deep emotions at the grave - Beautifully written, Jan - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/20/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/20/2016 10:48:00 AM
Stunning write Jan, I love your emotive poems the best! This form really agrees with you!
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Date: 7/20/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment John:-) I do try to write in styles other than humour :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/20/2016 9:12:00 AM
Beautiful sad and brilliant x
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Wendy:-) I realise I've written this form recently so may try and write another if I have time:-) hugs jan xx

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