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Endless Dreams

in the palm of endless dreams whispers of passion may tarry adrift on the wings that thoughts carry a ripple of touch taut at the seams arouses me awake, aglow in dawn's blush although her horizon's rendered less flush in the palm of endless dreams October 5, 2019 Make it seven poetry contest Sponsored by Joseph May Image #2

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2019 5:14:00 PM

one of my favorites on the list. Congrats, Sandy

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/22/2019 6:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/21/2019 2:42:00 PM

Back with congrats on your TOP win, Sandy..just as expected.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/21/2019 7:04:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend, you did say it would be in the winner's circle :) hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 10/21/2019 9:39:00 AM

A beautiful take on this picture prompt, Sandra! ...and the repeated line is poetically impactful ~ congratulations on your fine victory! Regards // paul

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/21/2019 10:52:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul.... hugs :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2019 5:33:00 AM

beautifully rhymed Sandra, :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/21/2019 10:52:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan....rhyme is a struggle for me, so your comment really brought a smile... hugs :)

Hello There

Date: 10/21/2019 12:25:00 AM

Congratulations, my friend, on this enchanting win :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/21/2019 10:51:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend :) hugs

Joseph May

Date: 10/20/2019 6:59:00 PM

Wonderful write Sandra, Congrats on your win..

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/20/2019 7:10:00 PM

Thank you so much Joseph for the honor of a win, and for hosting another wonderful contest :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 10/9/2019 8:01:00 AM

Absolutely perfect, the rhymes and the flow of this poem are so smooth and melodic. I love everything about this. Best wishes in the contest my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/9/2019 8:24:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend...with all these rhyming contests around i need all the practice i can get :)

Silent One

Date: 10/6/2019 1:01:00 PM

There you go with your rhymes again...

Silent One
Date: 10/6/2019 1:12:00 PM

I was just joking, your rhymes are fine... and i know how you feel..

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/6/2019 1:04:00 PM

because the contest called for it....i used to pass these by but am trying my hand at them now....i am not as strong in rhyme...maybe one day... hugs :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/5/2019 10:01:00 PM

Beautifully done. I love it. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings and love, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/5/2019 10:40:00 PM

Thank you so much Gina, God bless :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/5/2019 6:08:00 PM

Lovely, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/5/2019 8:13:00 PM

thank you Line :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/5/2019 3:06:00 PM

This is excellent, Sandy..your pen flows just as swiftly in rhymes as it does in free verse..splendid imagery, my friend. This is a TOP win.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/5/2019 4:19:00 PM

Thank you my friend...the picture inspired these thoughts... hugs :)

Hello There

Date: 10/5/2019 1:13:00 PM

Love it <3 Love the phrasing "in the palm of endless dreams..."

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/5/2019 1:29:00 PM

thank you...that palm leaf just barely visible inspired that phrase.... :) hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 10/5/2019 12:50:00 PM

Very nice Sandy, enjoyed the rhymes, hard to believe you struggle with them, this is very good, hope for the best in another contest win!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/5/2019 1:11:00 PM

Thank you John...i wrote this whole poem, and then read the contest rules and said, oh it needs to rhyme but because i already had my thought process penned out, it seemed easier to turn it into a rhyming poem...:) hugs