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Ending At the Beginning

Backwards became forward Up became down What I thought was square Turned out to be round Some who I thought loved me Turned out to be foes Twelve dozen roses Not absorbed by one nose I could see in the dark Became blinded by light When I should be afraid I was feeling alright A topsy turvy world Never knowing what to expect Even when I had earned it I couldn't seem to find respect I climbed many ladders Slid down my share of snakes Learned more by losing Lived with my mistakes The top was the bottom My ideas flipped around Transformed by heaven Prostate on the ground With my head bowed low My heart became clear What seemed a great distance Was actually quite near For within my smallness I discovered what was vast The future had been written By the Author of my past Things I counted as sorrow Revealed to me my joy I could not become a man Without living as a boy My end will be my beginning When I am raised from the earth What some will consider death Will turn out to be my birth For I have been forgiven Without paying any cost Thankfuly my Savior found me Long before I knew I was lost

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Date: 10/14/2016 5:35:00 AM
Good quatrain Rick, and a nice message you created here with your careful choice of words. Nice work! MC
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Date: 7/25/2014 4:54:00 PM
You have such a great easy flowing style..You make writing look effortless and for that i am jealous!! Well done!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/25/2014 8:07:00 PM
You are kind, thanks for the thoughtful visits.
Date: 6/20/2014 9:09:00 PM
Outstanding! Richard!!... Brilliant write my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/25/2014 8:06:00 PM
Hi Arlene, sorry I missed this visit. Thanks so much.
Date: 6/20/2014 8:24:00 AM
Hmmmm, I am putting this as one of my favs, I love the last line " Thankfully my Savior found me, Long before I knew I was lost"...this is a great write Richard...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/20/2014 9:08:00 AM
Thanks again Herzel.
Date: 6/19/2014 12:35:00 PM
This one really speaks all Richard....love it...just moves so wonderfully...and great message...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/19/2014 8:06:00 PM
Hello again Donna, thanks for having a look and commenting.
Date: 6/12/2014 11:25:00 PM
Beautiful Richard. I gave you a 7. When visiting me rate mine. I like the empowerment in this poem... Smile and hug Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/13/2014 8:12:00 AM
Thanks for the 7 Verlena, hugs back.
Date: 6/8/2014 12:32:00 PM
Richard; This is an awesome poem. I agree with you. In our culture we have a saying - Life is but a dream - death is when we wake up. Great poem, I loved it... Lucilla
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/13/2014 8:14:00 AM
Interesting saying, I believe when I die my real life will begin.
Date: 6/5/2014 9:23:00 AM
I must be going crazy, I was sure I commented on this, ironic considering the poem! LOL Loved this one!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/13/2014 8:15:00 AM
Thanks Arthur.
Date: 6/5/2014 9:17:00 AM
Amen.... blessed,,,
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/13/2014 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Patrick.
Date: 6/4/2014 11:26:00 PM
Such a thought-full write. Really enjoyed this and I am glad to read this tonight. It is sure to inspire GOOD dreams. The fifth stanza was my favourite. Sliding down snakes.. ha! I've done that, too ;) Good night--- thanks for sharing this art!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/13/2014 8:00:00 AM
You are kind, I appreciate your thoughtful comment.
Date: 6/3/2014 2:38:00 PM
i tuned into piece with such wonder, rich... impressed.. huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/4/2014 9:40:00 AM
Hi Nette, thanks and Huggs back.
Date: 6/3/2014 7:53:00 AM
Richard..... The future had been written by the Author of my past. Very moving piece. Your faith continues to inspire. Blessing.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2014 7:57:00 AM
Good afternoon Eileen. I'm pleased this one resonates with you. Blessings to you as well, fortunately for us he has an infinite supply.
Date: 6/3/2014 6:17:00 AM
Brilliant! "What seemed a great distance was actually quite near" Our Lord is as close as our breaths, our heartbeat.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2014 7:23:00 AM
He permeates us at an even greater level than our DNA. He is beyond our ability to comprehend. God is revealed in the smallest of the small and the vastness of the universe. His signature is on all things and still we fail to recognize Him. Thanks for visiting and Commenting.
Date: 6/2/2014 5:57:00 PM
brilliant poem Rick one of your best excellent pen hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2014 7:25:00 AM
Hi Shadow, thanks, I enjoyed your poems yesterday. You have been inspired lately.
Date: 6/2/2014 3:53:00 PM
brilliant! You have impressed me, as you always do, I loved the last stanza, that was the perfect ending to a great poem. Awesome writing my friend :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2014 7:26:00 AM
Hello Casarah, you are kind.
Date: 6/2/2014 8:26:00 AM
Wonderful uplifting poem Richard. i really enjoyed it from start to finish. hugs Jan xxxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2014 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Jan, that pleases me.

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