Ending At the Beginning

Backwards became forward
Up became down
What I thought was square
Turned out to be round

Some who I thought loved me 
Turned out to be foes
Twelve dozen roses
Not absorbed by one nose

I could see in the dark
Became blinded by light
When I should be afraid
I was feeling alright

A topsy turvy world
Never knowing what to expect
Even when I had earned it
I couldn't seem to find respect

I climbed many ladders
Slid down my share of snakes
Learned more by losing
Lived with my mistakes

The top was the bottom
My ideas flipped around
Transformed by heaven
Prostate on the ground

With my head bowed low
My heart became clear
What seemed a great distance
Was actually quite near

For within my smallness
I discovered what was vast
The future had been written
By the Author of my past

Things I counted as sorrow
Revealed to me my joy
I could not become a man
Without living as a boy

My end will be my beginning 
When I am raised from the earth
What some will consider death
Will turn out to be my birth

For I have been forgiven
Without paying any cost
Thankfuly my Savior found me
Long before I knew I was lost
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 5:35 AM
Good quatrain Rick, and a nice message you created here with your careful choice of words. Nice work! MC
Dictates Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 4:54 PM
You have such a great easy flowing style..You make writing look effortless and for that i am jealous!! Well done!!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 8:07 PM
You are kind, thanks for the thoughtful visits.
Smith Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 9:09 PM
Outstanding! Richard!!... Brilliant write my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene..
Lamoureux Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 8:06 PM
Hi Arlene, sorry I missed this visit. Thanks so much.
Poshiwa Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 8:24 AM
Hmmmm, I am putting this as one of my favs, I love the last line " Thankfully my Savior found me, Long before I knew I was lost"...this is a great write Richard...
Lamoureux Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 9:08 AM
Thanks again Herzel.
Jones Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 12:35 PM
This one really speaks all Richard....love it...just moves so wonderfully...and great message...
Lamoureux Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 8:06 PM
Hello again Donna, thanks for having a look and commenting.
Walker  Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 11:25 PM
Beautiful Richard. I gave you a 7. When visiting me rate mine. I like the empowerment in this poem... Smile and hug Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Thanks for the 7 Verlena, hugs back.
Carrillo Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 12:32 PM
Richard; This is an awesome poem. I agree with you. In our culture we have a saying - Life is but a dream - death is when we wake up. Great poem, I loved it... Lucilla
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 8:14 AM
Interesting saying, I believe when I die my real life will begin.
Vaso Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 9:23 AM
I must be going crazy, I was sure I commented on this, ironic considering the poem! LOL Loved this one!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 8:15 AM
Thanks Arthur.
Nigros Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Amen.... blessed,,,
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Thanks Patrick.
Macmillan Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 11:26 PM
Such a thought-full write. Really enjoyed this and I am glad to read this tonight. It is sure to inspire GOOD dreams. The fifth stanza was my favourite. Sliding down snakes.. ha! I've done that, too ;) Good night--- thanks for sharing this art!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 8:00 AM
You are kind, I appreciate your thoughtful comment.
Onclaud Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 2:38 PM
i tuned into piece with such wonder, rich... impressed.. huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Hi Nette, thanks and Huggs back.
Manassian Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Richard..... The future had been written by the Author of my past. Very moving piece. Your faith continues to inspire. Blessing.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 7:57 AM
Good afternoon Eileen. I'm pleased this one resonates with you. Blessings to you as well, fortunately for us he has an infinite supply.
Sirak Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 6:17 AM
Brilliant! "What seemed a great distance was actually quite near" Our Lord is as close as our breaths, our heartbeat.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 7:23 AM
He permeates us at an even greater level than our DNA. He is beyond our ability to comprehend. God is revealed in the smallest of the small and the vastness of the universe. His signature is on all things and still we fail to recognize Him. Thanks for visiting and Commenting.
Hamilton Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 5:57 PM
brilliant poem Rick one of your best excellent pen hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 7:25 AM
Hi Shadow, thanks, I enjoyed your poems yesterday. You have been inspired lately.
Nance Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 3:53 PM
brilliant! You have impressed me, as you always do, I loved the last stanza, that was the perfect ending to a great poem. Awesome writing my friend :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 7:26 AM
Hello Casarah, you are kind.
Allison Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 8:26 AM
Wonderful uplifting poem Richard. i really enjoyed it from start to finish. hugs Jan xxxx
Lamoureux Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Jan, that pleases me.
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