End of Winter

end of winter's day brisk breeze stirs cold north air brrr... wild violets bloom

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Robert Johnson

Date: 3/8/2014 9:01:00 AM

Hope springs eternal with the blossoms of the day. Keep the faith. Spring is coming. Peace. :) Lovely haiku Sara.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2014 10:31:00 PM

Sara, I really like this. Actually the brrr part is not necessary. You don't have to stick to that traditional 5/7/5 count. so shorter lines look even better!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2014 5:12:00 PM

I hope this is the end of this year's winter... We need more flowers... PD

James Kelley

Date: 3/5/2014 6:08:00 AM

A fine haiku...It has been an interesting season here in Texas...I'm ready for sunshine

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/4/2014 10:49:00 PM

I think it is very close to the end of winter...we are having warmer weather as of late, will be in the 40's soon! Thank goodness! I sure hope to see the beauty at which you describe within this poem, this gorgeous Haiku my friend! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/4/2014 9:11:00 AM

a hint of spring! Enjoyed. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2014 8:17:00 AM

.... I hope you're right, Sara - brrrr....brrrr... - Lovely haiku! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)