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Enclosed Rhyme

First she saw the slow moving yuky slug, That crawled across the floor Then there was the Gecko, running up the door Tasty treat he followed until he touched that slimy bug

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Date: 9/4/2010 4:51:00 PM
Well Sara..what a visual this was.. I just luv the enclosed rhyme form...its magical to me... u did an excellent piece here my friend... enjoyed that slimy little Gecko..haha..
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Date: 9/4/2010 2:49:00 PM
yuk, survival in the jungle, natures way, I feel sad for the slug, I know what a bleeding heart.. loved you poem.. Constance
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