Empty Town

The town is empty. The sky
 is purple, and sick. The road
is dusty, and the tar is cracked.

 The bar is silent,
 the jukebox is broken,
 pint glasses shattered 
 across rotting floorboards
(the whiskey is fine) –

 the church is quiet,
blessed with the sanctity of silence. Empty pews
with no kneeling. 

The wind howls, the dirt
dances; there is no life.

Poor wayfaring stranger, 
don’t you believe in ghosts?

Dark clouds gather, 
and fill the spirits with sickness.
Malaise, a bloated uneasiness,
bubbles up. The perpetual unrest,
the thick stench of death. 

The ghosts cry into the wind,
singing,
“this world –
 and the next – is full of woe.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 2, 2016 at 1:28 AM
Jon, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry XOX ~LINDA~
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January 7, 2015 at 8:54 PM
I rather like this..."Atmospheric"!! :-) john.
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January 11, 2015 at 5:13 PM
thank you for commenting john! I was going for atmospheric!
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