EMPTY POCKETS

[Verse 1]
I got these empty pockets, baby,
Where your sweet love used to live.
Used to wake up to your heartbeat,
Now I don’t know what to give.
Time just flew — yeah, left me behind,
Sittin’ here, cryin’ in the quiet.
No goodbye, no last kiss —
Just a heart that don’t know how to quit.

[Refrain]
Mmm, I got empty pockets,
Ain’t got gold, ain’t got green, ain’t got a clue.
Yeah, I got empty pockets,
But baby, I’m still full of you.

[Verse 2]
Ain’t no pictures on the wall,
Just that old clock tickin’ slow.
I keep askin’ that mirror,
“Hey man, where’d she go?”
It don’t talk back —
Just fogs up when I breathe,
And hums that same sad song
You used to sing to me.

[Refrain]
I got empty pockets,
Ain’t got nothin’ I can do.
Oh, I got empty pockets,
But this heart’s still full of you.

[Bridge]
I tried to write you letters,
But baby, my hands shook too much.
I set fire to your memory,
But that fire still burns my touch.
Lord, I’m empty, I’m tired, I’m through —
But somehow, I’m still carryin’ you.

[Final Chorus]
Yeah, I got empty, empty pockets,
No luck, no plans, no breakthrough.
I got empty pockets,
But this fool’s still full of you.
Said I got nothin’ in my hands,
But your name’s in every room.
Oh, I got empty pockets...
But I’m still, I’m still full of you.

[Outro – whispered, broken]
Baby... yeah, I’m still full of you...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Harley Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Really liked this. Thanks for sharing.
Parry Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 1:36 AM
Believe me your pockets are certainly not empty the flow was fairly good and the rhyming was okay a bit more imagery would have brought more to the table but it still bounced along like a song Tim
Acrich Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 10:33 AM
i was going to post busted https://youtu.be/N7ZjYbP6X8Y
Anthony Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 2:39 PM
I really imagine the mood of the persona, Thank you Lyric Man. "…My heart is still full of you"
Mcmanes Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Enjoyed the symbolism and descriptive language too. Excellent lyrical flow too. Well done. RD
Nipas Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 7:08 PM
I love this one as well. Very frustrating feeling to have empty pockets while your heart is still full of a certain person. Thank you.
Laurie Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 7:53 PM
G'day Lyric Man … well done, empty pockets means more than no money, and you explained this nicely - Lindsay
Nicole Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Emptiness is a very painful emotion. You have expressed this so well. The last thought is beautiful "But my heart is still full of you" Memories always remain, no matter what. ~ Maia
Ajmal Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 6:33 PM
It s a really sad and heartfelt write, it s certainly sad to know that when he really need someone in his life, she has left him, a great idea and a great poem, you see that the mistakes isn't of girl, neither it's the boy who is to be blamed, but it's God and it's fate, who has written this story in this way, good luck and have a nice day
Newton Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 4:49 PM
I am just wondering if you valued the time it took to empty that pocket? Wink. Great write.
Onclaud Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 3:29 PM
with your generous heart, you will never be caught empty handed, D...enjoyed this!..huggs
George   Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 10:06 AM
This would make a great country song hit. Elaine
Swartz Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 9:57 AM
It is sad but you write in a very enjoyable form. It has a natural beat to it in my head when i read it.
Ball Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 9:55 AM
Ah the age old delemma. Made too many promises he couldn't keep. Said too many words he didn't mean. Now he's paying a price he can't afford. Sad but true. A fine write my friend. Bravo. God Bless, JB
Krampe Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 8:55 AM
The empty pockets are a great symbol. Enjoyed the lyrics.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 8:30 AM
This feels familiar is it a repost? I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I too like the use of repetition.
One Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Heartfelt lyrics.... Love is always free..
Acrich Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 8:06 AM
i like the way it repeats, like the Poe poem anabel lee , I have to learn to do that mine kind of ramble on , prose https://youtu.be/N7ZjYbP6X8Y
Chakrabarty Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Now that you're not at all a bankrupt on the first place.Regards LM.GL.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:11 AM
This is a songwriter's dream song; I can picture so many artists picking this up and making it a hit. It's a hit with me, by the way and I do not sing.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 6:55 AM
Melodramatic verses expressing the agony and desperation of a man in love for his darling girlfriend put into amazing verses with grandiose rhymes dear friend, Lyric Man. Exceptional as always!
Pandit Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 5:51 AM
Melancholy poem..message of emptiness very well sent and received...sad but to the point, Lyric Man.
Rose  Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 5:43 AM
Your the warlock of poetry when it comes to lyrics of the heart. I have enjoyed your poem this morning have a great day Lyric Man.
Reza Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 5:23 AM
Loud cry of separation sounds emotionally, fantastic
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