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Empty of You

Light filtered in through the windows The rug beneath my feet Was well worn As I sat filling up on sunshine I emptied out all the parts of me That you had touched And I could breathe again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/14/2018 9:14:00 PM
Breathtaking ( no pun intended)
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Date: 2/10/2018 1:28:00 PM
To be breathless all that time. And put it all in a rhyme. Takes a mind with skill. To convert thoughts to quill. Thank you for your thoughts
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