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Empty Hands

Reborn here now without baggage, when from the last life I was gone, I took nothing in my carriage, the outcome of karma well done. Mission completed, I return, reborn here now without baggage, solely with God’s grace in soul’s urn to spread the light of His message. Flying away from the life’s cage, divine freedom my soul has known, reborn here now without baggage, for I desire nothing to own. I was born once with empty hands, played my part unattached on stage, carried nothing, for thus He planned, reborn here now without baggage. October 8, 2021 Syllable count checked on howmanysyllables com Contest : Dawn Sponsor : Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 10/22/2021 9:28:00 AM
A truly outstanding piece~a well deserved win. Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 10/18/2021 7:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!! Your poem is beautiful and makes me feel like everyone and everything have a chance at renewal. Your talent is a blessing for all who read your work!
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Date: 10/18/2021 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your write, Subimal.
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Date: 10/18/2021 9:40:00 AM
…I took nothing in my carriage. Congratulations, Subimal!
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Date: 10/18/2021 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on a placement.
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Date: 10/18/2021 6:42:00 AM
It was a close call to decide between your poem and William’s for the top position; both being exceptional, to my mind. CK grata on your win, Subimal. Thank you for participating and look forward to your entry in the next Quietus contest coming up!
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Date: 10/10/2021 6:07:00 AM
I enjoyed your luminous poetry today, well done Subimal :)
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