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Empty Chairs

When Grandfather passed, his place at the table was still set. At first our family was aghast, but a widow’s devotional duty had been met and for us, that was as good as it could get. Then it was Mom who left us in her youth - another empty chair. To tell the truth, it felt like she was there, joining us in the pre-dinner prayer. This tradition seems strange, but we kept it going for loved ones old and young. Now an empty table I arrange, as to tradition’s memories I’ve clung. It won’t end till my final dinner bell’s rung. *Entry for the “Traditions” contest Written December 2, 2011

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Date: 6/14/2012 7:17:00 AM
I think it's sweet that you set places for people who are gone - gone, but not forgotten. I see you won with this. congratulations :)
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Date: 12/20/2011 6:54:00 PM
This is a another beautiful tradition, Carolyn... Their spirits are there at Christmas as always..Congratulations on your win! Much love, Annalise
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Date: 12/20/2011 5:21:00 PM
It's sad to think of the increasing number of the empty chairs. Better to think of the happiness on the other side when you greet them. Very good poem, Carolyn. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/19/2011 3:03:00 PM
Carolyn congrats on your win, a fine tradition..David
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Date: 12/19/2011 2:02:00 PM
Too many empty chairs at my table to save them but they are filled with loving folks just like them. Congratulations Carolyn on a lovely poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/19/2011 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Traditions" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2011 2:44:00 PM
What a lovely tradition. I think this is just beautiful. A surefire winner
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:49:00 PM
Actually, this is such a lovely tradition. It seems to honor those who have are no longer with us. A very thoughtful tradition! Nicely written, Carolyn. (ps...your comment on my haiku, made me stop and think about that 'horror movie'...decided to change the title of my poem. I'm glad you mentioned it, I wouldn't have thought of that! :)
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Date: 12/4/2011 8:22:00 AM
i have a lot of reverence for this poem it became special to me when i saw you at a table with six settings. six is the size of my family.
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Date: 12/4/2011 8:23:00 AM
next time i set my table for just once; i'll set it for three.
Date: 12/4/2011 8:19:00 AM
a sure winner. i had to go looking for my friend and had to go back as far a 9/30. i had no ideal such time had passed. but i have been working a lot. and in the comming weeks i will be doing doubles. but i will be paying much more attention to counting my chicks from now on. love john
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Date: 12/3/2011 12:48:00 AM
Yes Carolyn there is more to existence than death... i send you my warmest thoughts and to say the book is in my bed head cuboard..! so it dosen't get damaged:)
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Date: 12/2/2011 11:06:00 PM
I could relate to this, Carolyn-- when my brother passed away, we also leave an empty place for him.... I really like this touching piece--- yes, the memories of our loved ones stay with us far beyond the grave... :) hugs
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Date: 12/2/2011 9:38:00 PM
Empty chairs full of beautiful memories. a lovely verse Carolyn. good luck...Margaret
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Date: 12/2/2011 7:45:00 PM
Beautiful, Carolyn. Each of us carries a few empty chairs in our hearts and in our own way will keep the tradition going beyond any and all dinner bells. Good luck in the contest. Joe
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Date: 12/2/2011 7:14:00 PM
Seems like a natural thing to do at this time of year, remembering loved ones who have left in the special way we needed to help recover from the loss. This is so special Carolyn.
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Date: 12/2/2011 6:54:00 PM
I understand what you mean completely. The first year after my grandfathers death grandma kept his lounge chair empty and his slippers at the foot of the chair. Nobody say there all season. Later she had the chair removed and a simple chair put in it's place. But I'll never forget that year when grandma left that chair there empty all year long. That's how she slowly recovered from her loss. Awesome write Carolyn! Thanks for reminding me of that special year! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 12/2/2011 6:33:00 PM
We do miss them at this time of year especially. Lovely poem, Carolyn. Love, Joyce
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