Emma

Emma

No cheek was there, ere so fair, nor morning breath so cool
Red ribbons in her long blonde hair, eyes shining as bejewelled

With movement gently delicate, graceful as a swan
Her mind so nimbly intricate, a smile for everyone

Her spoken word, mellow and light, her voice as soft as sleep
The stories that she told each night, she said, were mine to keep

I saw her grow from babe in arm, as life began to weigh
Blessed with every worldly charm, to woman of today
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 2:58 PM
Rereading this one. It's one of your loveliet , methinks.
Duncan Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 10:09 PM
I like this very much Richard. Very nice win :)
Gorelick Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 6:34 PM
She sounds like a beauty..congrats on your big win. BG
Oyewole Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 4:31 PM
Wonderful and lovely pen! Congrats on your grand win, R D Seal!!!
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Wonderful descriptive Couplet. I can see why it took 1st place. Congrats Richard - Connie
Seal Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 6:39 PM
Thank you Connie, long time no see, I'll be round to pay you a visit
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 3:22 AM
Lovely character-sketch of Emma. Congrats on the fine win, richard
Seal Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 6:32 PM
A short character sketch of my youngest daughter Doc. Thank you
Britt Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 10:56 PM
PERFECT! Grats on your 1st place win. Well deserved! Christopher Thor Britt
Seal Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 6:27 PM
Thanks Chris, much appreciated
Kayode Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 10:46 PM
Congrats on the win Richard . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
Seal Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 6:23 PM
Thank you Kay, nice of you to say, but you know, we are all champions here
Pettit Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 10:19 PM
Very nicely done. No wonder it was chosen number one in the contest. Congratulations!
Seal Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 6:13 PM
Thank you Robert, very nice comment from you
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 8:17 PM
Congratulations, Richard. You really knocked this one out of the park!!
Seal Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 6:06 PM
well, I'm sending you a THANK YOU, this is not to annoy you or just fill up your email lol, it's to let you know Petal, how much I appreciate you
A   Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 11:08 PM
Lovely, Lovely, Richard... Stopping by to wish you a happy valentines. Hope I'm not late. We still got a few hours here... hugs and smiles... from Linda
Seal Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 3:06 PM
Never too late for one of your smiles to arrive my Sweet Dark Friend, hope you're keeping well
Jones Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 7:08 PM
A beautiful poem...a beautiful Emma....many original words...I think the judge will love it...
Seal Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 5:47 PM
Hi Donna, Thanks for your beautiful comment, much appreciated
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 12:08 PM
this is utterly charming, Richard. I think it will be a judges' fave in her contest. Nice seeing you at my poems again!
Seal Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 5:41 PM
Hi Petal, still struggling for time, I'll be round to see you soon. thank you for this lovely comment
Williams Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 11:36 AM
Richard just excellent ...David
Seal Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 5:39 PM
Thank you David, from you this is greatly appreciated
Carrillo Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 9:31 AM
A very beautiful and well written poem. I have read a few poems of EMMA. If it is for the contest - I wish you luck. I am feeling much better now. ... Lucilla
Seal Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 5:39 PM
Hi Lucy, glad you're feeling better, will be looking in on you soon. Thanks for the comment, very nice.
Manassian Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 5:15 AM
This is beautiful beyond compare...Every line...absolute perfection...Oh...how beautiful this is, Mr Seal! I must say.....and I really shouldn't do this....but, I HOPE YOU WIN WITH THIS ONE! It took my breath away!
Seal Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Why thank you Mrs Ghali, very nice of you to say so.
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