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for Unseeking Seeker's Embodying the Light contest

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Line of inquiry: "truth imbibed awaits assimilation we feel it in our bones in time dissolved meditation" by Unseeking Seeker I find myself a quiet spot that I might meditate in sweet tranquility. In comfort on a bed of grass I lie and trust that I have capability . . . the capability to take things in: to listen to the thought that cross my mind and feel those things felt underneath the skin, for mindfulness is what I need to find. Of expectations I am letting go. I feel my heartbeat with each breath I take. I’m open to what comes as spirit-flow. Nothing must I have to do with what is fake. It’s truth I seek. What more can I desire than that which comes so beautifully and bright to wrap my soul and lift me ever higher to that utter peace and bliss of God’s pure light.

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Date: 2/13/2025 2:26:00 AM
"It’s truth I seek. What more can I desire than that which comes so beautifully and bright" - A compelling writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/11/2025 4:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Keep the beauty.
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Date: 2/6/2025 9:06:00 PM
Inspiring words, best to your journey...
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Date: 2/1/2025 3:30:00 PM
Such a tranquil and peaceful Poem from you Andrea being in a place of peace with your surroundings and inner feelings, perfectly written for the Contest. I wish you all the best in the contest. Hugs...
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Date: 2/1/2025 12:33:00 PM
Very lovely, inspirational and Divinely inspired. If we set aside ourselves, fears and insecurities -- then there is only perfection to see, God's overwhelming beauty presence deepening our creative roots and heightening miraculous shared eternal blossoming. Love it!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/1/2025 12:55:00 PM
thanks so much, Joe.
Date: 2/1/2025 9:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Embodying the Light" write. Great Ending.... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day as you write away..................
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Date: 2/1/2025 8:44:00 AM
Andrea, this poem is thought provoking. It makes me think about what truth really is. It's not easy to be comfortable with what happens around us, but we can certainly (as you describe) have inner peace within ourselves and how we feel about our own being. Anyway...smiles!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/1/2025 8:59:00 AM
I think we can only know truth once we die. But I know you don't believe our spirits move on. Inner peace will have to suffice for now!
Date: 2/1/2025 6:33:00 AM
Wonderful write Andrea, best wishes
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/1/2025 8:57:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph
Date: 2/1/2025 3:24:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. If we seek truth, we shall find it when God is ready to reveal it to us, provided we have reached the point for Him to reveal it. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 2/1/2025 2:20:00 AM
Hi Andrea, the pathway of truth will light your way, wish you well in the contest God bless. xx
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:17:00 PM
A difficult subject, but is a bliss to read your thoughts dear poet. Congratulations for reigning the Best 100 contest poets all-time chart and past 6 months chart, dear poet friend. Three Cheers!!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/1/2025 8:57:00 AM
Thank you. I know I was not always at the top in the last six months. On that one I am always up and down. It's really hard trying to keep up on all the contests and right now there are four I won't even enter!

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