Embers

The eyes of yours are 
like the fair, amber sunset
collecting all the 

light of the past day.
Smoldering embers, dancing 
fireflies; they warm me

up inside and I 
am finally aware 
that I am still alive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Deremer Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 4:36 PM
Good job.
Bosa Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 4:37 PM
Thank you! :-)))
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