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Embers

Within the embers of this night a memory lives on of a time when the sun rose, lighting up my world and all, because of you; Summers of our past linger in my mind as winter comes anew; I recall the fireplace talks and sweet surrenders, of our blessed union; You came to me, a sweet vision of something long sought never did I think I could ever hold someone like you, in fond embrace; This reverie born in spring endures through every season these dreams remained in the realm of grace, so did our sacred love; When the dawn arises to shed light upon the room, I am left with the reality you left me...far, far too soon. By:******* & ******* FIRST PLACE WINNER entered "DO-IT (DUETS)" poetry contest sponsored by James Edward Lee Sr.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/17/2021 5:59:00 PM

Ahh what a glorious collaboration! Brilliant write.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/17/2021 6:53:00 PM

Thanks go to Mystic Rose Rose, Caren. She was a fantastic partner. In fact, she came up with the theme. We worked together on everything else. She also came up with the illustration. Proud of her!

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/17/2021 1:52:00 PM

Hi L. Milton, I just read this beauty on Mystic Rose’s page. I can't believe two people wrote it. . You and Mystic Rose wrote such a well-written piece about two people that deeply in love.You two write well together. I look forward to reading more collaborations from you two in the future. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/17/2021 1:55:00 PM

Thanks so much for your effusive praise, Alexis. I must point out that Mystic Rose Rose came up with the theme, and we truly worked together throughout the poem. It was a very enjoyable endeavor.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/17/2021 11:45:00 AM

I cannot have created the image as well, you curtailed, detailed and conjoined. Always on hand if you feel inspired for another one. :) take care

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/17/2021 1:07:00 PM

Thanks, Mystic. I will. I think our poem was well-received.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/16/2021 1:13:00 PM

This is a fine, rhythmic, haunting collaboration, Milt. Hats off! ~ Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/16/2021 3:26:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Mystic Rose Rose made a good partner. Credit for the theme, design, layout, publication with picture all belong to her. We both worked on the poem, so it is difficult to tell what belongs to whom.

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/16/2021 12:36:00 PM

Very sad read Milton, but the poetry is beautiful, especially the last lines where the dawning sun brings the true reality of a loss gone too soon, a reminder if any, that we must enjoy this moment, for it’s all we’re sure of, cheers David

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/16/2021 12:43:00 PM

So true, David. Many of us have experienced this loss, so it resonates deep inside of our souls.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/16/2021 12:36:00 PM

I Loved it, Milton, And now it's like a long-lost dream that can't ever let go. Great poem, best regards.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/16/2021 12:43:00 PM

Thanks, Lasaad. The primary theme was Mystic's suggestion, but it's a true collaboration. I could not have expressed it like this without her.