Embarking

an elusive love peering out beyond the pure meadow dancing in my heart this gift of completion warms a stirring heart gathering momentum I set out upon a quest to capture

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 9:53:00 PM

I see you got three poems past round one. Way to go,Rick. Congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 6:50:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv.. threes a charm...

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/5/2011 7:06:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your Kimo being featured. Vince

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2011 3:47:00 PM

Great one to be on homepage as a featured poem this week..Enjoyed reading..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2011 8:48:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your featured poem this week on the soup.. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv..

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/25/2010 11:57:00 PM

just catching up, Rick (i work weekends), wow worth waiting for, a new form to me this, very well expressed, love it. Harry

Molly Cooper

Date: 7/23/2010 7:23:00 AM

Warms my heart this morning Rick, thank you I needed that~ Love Molly

Constance La France

Date: 7/23/2010 6:05:00 AM

Gosh do I love this form Kimo ~ you did it so lovely ~ I must try to write one like this ~ how more beautiful does it get ~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/22/2010 6:02:00 PM

Lovely lilting words Rick.. and a wonderful form too.. I Applaud U on your new contest.. and it was a joy to write a new refreshing entry for u.. with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/22/2010 11:53:00 AM

Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Rick. Love, Carol

Susan Mills

Date: 7/22/2010 8:27:00 AM

Reads like capturing a dream. What a wonderful kimo. Love, Susan

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/21/2010 10:13:00 PM

love is a wonderful quest especially if you are victorious

Vesna Arsenich

Date: 7/21/2010 9:05:00 PM

captivaiting poem!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/21/2010 9:00:00 PM

What a beautiful Kimo, Rick! Well done. Love the uplifting quality of this poem. You've set the tone for the rest of us to emulate. Love, Carolyn