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Embarassment

Asher had dashed into the classroom, late as usual, arriving breathlessly, in the middle of the chanting of the morning anthem. “I apologize for inconveniencing, my learning community,” Asher ran through the standard apology phrase rapidly, still catching his breath. A final decision, a terrible punishment, an overwhelming statement of failure. “I apologize to my classmates,” Asher concluded. “We accept your apology, Asher.” The class recited the standard response in unison. Many of the students were biting their lips to keep from laughing. He had hung his head with guilt and embarrassment.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/26/2016 2:27:00 AM
Rilee McKibben, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/24/2016 8:44:00 AM
Love reading this emotional poem, Rilee, a 7. I want to apologize, but I can not accept your poem because it isn't in Pantoum form please don't let this stop you from entering other contest. I like your poem and it is good. You can soup mail me if you want me to show you how to do the form. I also want to welcome you to Poetry Soup you will enjoy everyone. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:22:00 PM
Rilee, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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