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Elly May

ELLY MAY poem by: Maria Williams T'was the night before her birthday and Elly May Still in the office putting stuff away In her horn rimmed glasses and grey flannel suit She was the epitome of perfection, the essence of truth She was the best secretary that they'd ever had They had sure gone to pieces after that Yorkshire lad Elly May had filed and tidied and worked like a slave For her two grisly bosses Mr Smith and McKnave After ten long years in this office so dim In her grey flannel suit, the atmosphere grim She needed some new clothes, she needed a rise She needed an optometrist to check on her eyes Poor Elly May paused and leaned on her file She closed her eyes and wondered awhile She dwelled on the hardships and hurdles she'd crossed In her pursuit of dreams -and the hopes that she'd lost That tall handsome stranger never did come her way And he never ever will thought poor Elly May The day dawned ,the birds sang 'twas a beautiful morn But Elly May wished she'd never been born Her rice bubbles refused to Snap Crackle and Pop Her feet felt like lead and her hair like a mop RING Ring went the doorbell, gosh a special delivery Elly May bit her lip and went all shivery The package looked expensive with a lovely red bow Its a mistake thought she its not for me No it was clearly addressed to her -No mistake Her heart was pounding and she started to quake She managed to get the wrapping undone And wondered aloud whose heart she had won She hoped upon hope'twas no cruel joke Or some silly dream from which she'd not woke And there it was midst the tissue all satin and lace a creation upon which she could only but gaze Try it on compelled a voice-but there was no one there She'd be late for work-should she? could she dare? No card to say who it was from Then with hands that trembled she slipped the dress on How it oozed how it rustled how delicately it hung How it shimmered and shone-how provocatively it clung The waist nipped in the neck dipped low she cut such a fine figure of which she didn't know She was beautiful all along she thought with a sigh She had lacked the nerve or the confidence to try She'd resigned herself to her terrible fate Oh Fiddle Dee said that voice Its never too late Now make haste it continued There are things to be done There are people to meet-that worlds full of fun The first thing to do at a quarter to ten Is to get on the phone to those two grissly men Tell them where to get off you'll not be their slave They'll fold up without you that Smith and McKnave Years have gone by since that eventful day That magic morning saw the change of Elly May Now she calls herself Ella - theres a smile on her lips A song in her heart and a sway to her hips Being a jet setter is not easy, her days are never grey Its Paris by night and London by day But every now and again she thinks back with a shudder Then silently gives thanks to her fairy Godmother Written many moons ago for my daughter who wanted a modern day Cinderella story Written and published in an Australian National Women's Magazine for whom I wrote motivational stories and poems intermittently.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/13/2018 3:18:00 AM
Wow, A unique and wonderful creation, and not surprised at it's publication, such an amazing poet you are Maria..
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Date: 7/13/2018 4:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Harry, so glad that you liked it. Well, coming from such a unique amazing poet like yourself that is sheer poetry to my ears. Thanks my friend for the visit and lovely comments always, I truly appreciate it....Maria hugs
Date: 12/28/2017 8:08:00 PM
Now THAT is quite the fairy tale you created, Maria. VERY nicely done. I hope your daughter loved it!!
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Date: 12/28/2017 11:24:00 PM
Thank you dear Andrea. Now that coming from an excellent poet like yourself is a huge feather for me. Thank you for your support, I really and truly appreciate it....Maria xxx
Date: 12/10/2017 3:10:00 PM
Ohh my dear and lovely friend Maria, I was enthralled and enraptured with your modern day Cinderella story. You are a brilliant and enticing story-teller and I enjoyed every captivated moment I spent with your poem. You never fail to leave me in awe of your talent and poetry. Warmest wishes my creative and graceful friend ~Susan
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Date: 12/13/2017 12:19:00 AM
Susan my brilliant poetess friend from this site, thank you so much for your lovely visit and always encouraging comments, I really appreciate it you know. A big thank you for all the support you have shown and also for being such a 'shining light 'to one and all here. We really do need more people like you.Love and Light....Maria xxx
Date: 11/26/2017 4:20:00 PM
Maria: Have they written the musical score for the movie yet? I'm looking forward to seeing this young lady in motion. Thank you for sharing a wonderful piece with all of us on the soup. I know you'll keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 11/27/2017 12:19:00 AM
Oh Oldbuck you are too kind. If by any chance this gets made into a movie rest assured you my dear friend are getting Gold Pass tickets. What a wonderful review you have given me. Looking forward to reading more of your beautiful poetry...Maria xx
Date: 10/31/2017 8:04:00 AM
You wrote this so long ago.. I was still a teen.. Great that you got published, but I know you do not care for such things.. I can see the early signs of talent..Is it fictional?
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Date: 11/27/2017 12:21:00 AM
Yes , lol, of course it is. It was for a competition, and it got published. Thank you for visiting dear S1....Maria xxx
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Date: 11/27/2017 12:20:00 AM
Yes , lol, of course it is. It was for a competition, and it got published. Thank you for visiting dear S1....Maria xxx
Date: 7/28/2017 3:42:00 PM
Beautiful happy endings are the best, just as this poem illustrates, Maria. This poem made me smile w/joy. So well written, you did your daughter proud w/this fine piece of poetry. Love and peace always.
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Freddie, so glad that you liked this one so much. Written many moons ago. I really appreciate your visits and friendly comment my dear friend...Maria
Date: 7/9/2017 6:26:00 AM
After many a click-a-click I managed to find a poem of yours which I had not previously read, Maria!! Pleasantly entertained ... we never know what life has in store for us; that's why dreams and hope must be kept alive! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:49:00 AM
Written many years ago Paul, but still a fave with her. So glad that you liked it. Thanks for the visit and lovely comments...Maria
Date: 6/10/2017 8:23:00 AM
A brilliant ending Maria...And a story well told..But what about the midnight hour? :-)
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Date: 6/11/2017 7:24:00 AM
No Midnight hour for this lady Joseph lol, thanks for the lovely comments...Maria
Date: 5/6/2017 1:22:00 PM
You tell a story with such freshness and reality that it soon attaches itself to our reality and we take partial ownership of the emotions poured forth. A poem offering quiet reflection on the essence of being human in a not so perfect world, and how a little confidence and self love can improve both your life and your attitude. A fairytale worth reading. Emile. #7
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Date: 5/7/2017 7:00:00 AM
btw, I will be posting another one today, two versions, a condensed one for the competition ( fav. songs, run by Silent One), and the other is an extended version. A little bit Dean Koontz, Steven King, throw in what's going on in the world today and you've got the stage set for a macabre nightmare. Don't worry I haven't joined the 'Dark Side' Lol
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Date: 5/7/2017 6:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Emile, you don't know how happy that makes me feel, especially as I don't regard myself as a good poet as all, but I do enjoy writing . I have started several novels, but they'll never get finished, Lose interest too quick, plus with a busy work schedule the interest goes. Thanks once again for your continued support.
Date: 4/2/2017 1:32:00 AM
Good Morning Maria. Well who wouldn't like this tale young or old. I am the forever dreamer and fairyland person so I truly enjoyed your thoughts and intake. I'm sure your daughter did too. Yes, thank goodness for fairy godmothers. Well done
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Date: 3/18/2017 2:04:00 AM
Great story. Well done Maria
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Date: 3/19/2017 8:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth.
Date: 3/8/2017 9:28:00 PM
Nice storytelling - this is a Cinderella story indeed. Welcome to the Soup, Maria; I hope you enjoy the community here.
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Date: 3/9/2017 3:32:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome Agnes. I'm sure I will love it here.

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