Ella S Lullabies 3

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Ella’s Lullabies twilight wanes with a child’s fascination lullabies that deeply moves papa’s admiration dreams of generation inheritance inspiration powerful bond drawn with love tears creation values taught us with their loving hands determination 3/27/2016

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/4/2016 10:47:00 AM

Excellent, Eve!! One of the very best winning entries. Congratulations!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2016 12:52:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 3/31/2016 1:49:00 AM

Admirable!Eve, congrats on this inspirational write!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/31/2016 12:31:00 AM

Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write Eve..

Lu Loo

Date: 3/30/2016 9:16:00 PM

Eve, this is the greatest usage of monorhyme in the contest. This touched my heart very deeply. Thank you for sharing and for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Eve Roper
Date: 3/30/2016 10:39:00 PM

Thank you, Laura, the picture said everything that need to be said!!! The same admiration my granddaughter has for her papa. Thank you for creating a poem for the picture. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2016 7:05:00 AM

So beautiful and touching Eve :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2016 2:10:00 PM

I think she is going to find the contest very emotional to judge:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 3/28/2016 1:58:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, I hope Laura likes it:-) Hugs Eve

Jill Spagnola

Date: 3/28/2016 2:08:00 AM

I am still smiling...just an awesome shared cherished moment :), with love, jill

Eve Roper
Date: 3/28/2016 2:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jill, Hugs Eve