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Elevator Eyes

You know the look that you get The sandy summing up of your worth Can be peach positive or neon negative Can feel good like green spring or hurt Like a forest fire red burning potential Matters not if the look is unintentional Even karma kids do it as if a reflex No need to shout or get upset at Their lack of tack teal is their truth Focus more on the vibration of YOU Did your energy lemon lie or raspberry reveal The parental look to see your dress Whether male or female they obsess How you are perceived on them reflects Better be neat presentable blueberry best Would you be a good seed or bad Men can do it in secrete or like a shout Ogling or admiring to check her out Rolling red eyes over curves of soul She is an angel on a stripper pole Or maybe she is destined to be more Women do it maybe I’ll confess Watching him walk the width of his chest Listen to his words what do they possess Notice his shoes his crotch his tie and vest Deciding if I’ll cranberry curse or blackberry bless Elevator eyes do you see yourself Awareness of pink potential looking left Right inside and doing inventory well stare Embracing and recreating upon denim dare When you pass a mirror what do you see there

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Date: 7/16/2024 12:03:00 AM
loved the title, the theme and how you you wrote this. We should all look in the mirror before judging others.
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Karen Jones
Date: 7/16/2024 2:25:00 AM
Agree and appreciate your support Martin!
Date: 7/12/2024 7:27:00 AM
Elevator Eyes….what a brilliant and perfect title for this poem Karen! I know those looks positive and negative ….received and given no doubt!haha!! Wonderful poem l thoroughly enjoyed it …written so well!! Debx
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Karen Jones
Date: 7/12/2024 12:53:00 PM
:0) Aw thanks hugs
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Deb M
Date: 7/12/2024 11:19:00 AM
Awww thanks Karen….supportive because you write great poetry and seem like such a sweet kind person! Thats what matters my sweet friend xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 7/12/2024 8:31:00 AM
You are so supportive of my work and I appreciate you Deb!
Date: 7/12/2024 7:27:00 AM
I enjoy relaxed circumstances. I think there is a hint of that here. If thoughts of someone keeps you up at night, there may be a warning. Thanks for these poetic words.
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Karen Jones
Date: 7/12/2024 8:20:00 AM
Hugs Hilda for reading so many of my poems

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