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I am the light, I am the heat I banish night, shadows on a street I was the first, to come into view for air now I thirst, to grow the red hue fire and I are friends, when hot or dry together we are legends, atmosphere in the sky my winds make a connection, whispering the word giving life to reflection, when it has been heard I am your whole, a really cool dude cleansing your soul, nurturing your food careful how you touch, in me you can drown I am everything as such, I make fire back down now I am your rock, which delineates to soil fired up I can shock, whilst water can be my foil sustaining is my desire, the vegetation in life’s throng but without air, water, and fire, I am a barren song

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Date: 9/23/2023 8:03:00 PM
You did a most excellent job of putting yourself into this poem. I like the line of "fire and I are friends" Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/24/2023 2:37:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation LL

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