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Elemental Truths

rivers,flow from barren heights good,is drawn from evil might; springs,leaps forth from hidden parts talents,pour from human hearts; fire,burns 'neath the earth below passion,from single-minds,flow; light,each morn greets the day we,poets,our gifts relay

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2011 1:06:00 PM

thankxx Brian for your wonderful contest and them ..congrats to u and all your winners too.. appreciate my 5th place for "Winning Way"..as nothing works well without the Lord and us hand in hand... in life I have found this to be so my friend as I am quite sure u already know.. thankxx luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2011 7:46:00 PM

our gifts are so precious and we share with luv Brian.. a very creative piece my friend.. enjoy a happy weekend as u have presented these elemental truths..luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/13/2011 6:13:00 PM

So much truth in thhis little piece..well done Brian..so glad your back with us...BG

Judith Angell Meyer

Date: 5/13/2011 5:45:00 PM

Oh I like this Brian. Yes, Elemental truths! ~J~

Mourning Mist

Date: 5/13/2011 5:19:00 PM

good is never drawn from evil might,,,that is like saying God draws from satan,,nothing good comes out of evil

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 5/13/2011 5:49:00 PM

Actually I'd say that a lot of good comes from evil. That is to say, when we see so much evil around us every day, one just has to fight harder and harder not to lose sight of all the good. :-)

Yesica Lantigua

Date: 5/13/2011 4:03:00 PM

This is cute!!