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Element Of Air

A chill stiff fresh breeze tousled my hair as it swung around my eyes blinding me Walking on the beach sand squishing between my toes I wondered at Nature's might! Date: 30/10/2020 Submitted for: SPIN A SEDOKA Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Second Place

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Date: 11/5/2020 4:13:00 AM
Anitha, congratulations on your win in Nette's Sedoka contest with this excellent poem, beautiful imagery _Constance
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Date: 11/5/2020 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Constance.. for the visit and comment.. - hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 10/30/2020 10:00:00 AM
This is lovely and fitting for the contest..
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Date: 10/30/2020 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Silent One for your valuable comment. Gn. :)
Date: 10/30/2020 8:52:00 AM
YOu did the theme wonderfully!
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Date: 10/30/2020 10:52:00 AM
Thank you so much for your valuable comment Andrea... Hugs.. Gn :)
Date: 10/30/2020 8:12:00 AM
- A lovely poem ... wonderful feeling, Ami :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2020 10:51:00 AM
Anne thx dear for the visit and comment.. Luv n hugs.. Gn :)
Date: 10/30/2020 8:06:00 AM
Anitha, Yes, nature is a strong force to be faced with, yet, it is such a beautiful sight to behold. Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/30/2020 10:50:00 AM
Thank you so much for the visit and your valuable comment Sara.. - Hugs.. Gud night :)