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Element Earth

We come into this world, kicking and screaming, like boisterous butterfly birth.
We have nothing to our names, but flesh and bone that bear witness, of Element Earth.
Copper granules mixed with sunshine and water (amalgamations like boy meets daughter)
an investment that pays off with emerald leaves -
the earth is pure potential that the angel's weave into little yous and little mes
(let's not take grace for granted and make the great father grieve)
... rather let's step up to the plate with dirt beneath our nails and heaven in our eyes.
Everything I've learned, from dreary dreams, tell me it's not a time for sleep, but a time to rise.
For we are made of Element Earth, formed as stewards for the planet
from just a whisper and lumps of granite.
Who can measure our worth? (except the ethereal esophagus)
Are we blessed or are we cursed --- dreaming of sarcophagus.
We are doomed to fade!
      We are destined to bloom!
(in this big universe I believes there's room
for me      and you      and everyone)
But pure potential - though essential - is hard to tame.
What kind of earth are you?
The acorn seed, buried deep, with lovely dreams of growing,
or the famous statue, The Thinker, whom contemplates knowing.



Written March 6th, 2016
For the Elements: Part 1, Earth Contest Hosted by Brian Davey

Placed 1st
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Inman Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:53 PM
Another meaningful write Timothy-waiting for fire.
Hicks Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Thanks James! I believe I missed fire ... sad to say.
A   Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Tomothy, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
Hicks Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 11:54 PM
Thanks Linda!
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March 18, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Hi Tim, Congratulations on your 1st place win. A strong and deep write Tim well deserving of the highest placement. I enjoyed this write so much. You put so much into this write Tim. It has to be a seven my Friend....Vlad.
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Thanks again, my friend Raven. You are so kind and encouraging.
Haight Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 3:12 PM
A great write, Tim, with nice imagery and much depth. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 7:20 PM
Thank you Sandra! I appreciate you stopping by!
Jameson Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 12:20 PM
Nicely done, Tim-- a deep write that didn't venture away from the theme as the piece progressed. I enjoyed the inquisitive introspective angle mixed in with the parenthesis narrative-- very nicely done. Congrats on the win, well deserved.
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Thanks for your insightful comments, Sam, and for noticing the parenthesis ... they always sneak into my poems somehow.
Kimathi Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:58 AM
Greetings Timothy. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 7:10 PM
Greetings Teddy ... and thank you!
Gupta Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 1:41 AM
A great write and absolutely meriting the peak. ...
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 7:05 PM
Thank you very much Probir!
Leiser Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Wonderful poem and congrats on your top win, Timothy:)
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:48 PM
Thank you kindly Laura!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:46 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful top place win Timothy... big congrats!
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Thank you Upma!
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March 16, 2016 at 9:57 PM
Hi Timothy, Congratulations on your win with this excellent poem filled with primal imagery, which is just right for the theme. Cheers, Brian
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Thanks for the insightful comment, Brian :)
Scars Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 9:35 PM
Tim, congrats on your well deserved placement! Love this :)-luloo
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Thank you, Laura Loo. I'm sure you get this a lot, but your name is really fun to say ... it sounds almost musical.
Warrior Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Congrats on the Earthly Win Timothy...^WW^
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Thanks Winger Warrior :) An earthly win, but your comment was heavenly ... he he he ...
Smith Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Great going Tim, terrific piece, congratulations.
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Whoops ... my comment slipped up to you somehow. But I'll just say it right here ... Thank YOU Charlie Smith :)
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 12:21 PM
So happy that you liked my entry, Brian! Much appreciated :) Eventually I'll think of something for your wind contest ...
Davey Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering my friend
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 12:24 PM
So happy that you liked my entry, Brian! Much appreciated :) Eventually I'll think of something for your wind contest ...
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March 16, 2016 at 3:04 AM
Oh, this is going to do well Timothy. It reeks of individualism in a great way, and is beyond passionate for the love of Earth! #7
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March 21, 2016 at 8:06 PM
I said in a great way, and I was right. Congratulations on your top placement. One can't beat being unique..it is my highest compliment! Hugs, Connie
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March 21, 2016 at 8:05 PM
I said in a great way, and I was right. Congratulations on your top placement. One can't beat being unique..it is my highest compliment! Hugs, Connie
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 12:19 PM
"reeks of individualism" ... thanks for understanding me , Connie. Hopefully the stench isn't too noticeable though *checks armpits* .... Lol! And of course the 7 is a delight as well :)
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March 12, 2016 at 5:23 AM
"But pure potential - though essential - is hard to tame." Tell me about it. I love this poem, Timothy. I admire your unique parenthesis commentary, it's what makes your poetry distinctive from others I have read.The last few lines are golden.Favorite line: "Everything I've learned, from dreary dreams, tell me it's not a time for sleep, but a time to rise." There's something really upbeat and healing about your poetry. It pumps me up, and being a dark thinker, I quite like that! Always, Laura
Hicks Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Perhaps we can offset each other, my friend. You be melancholy, and I be happy ... lol. Truly though. I appreciate your in-depth comments and the way you catch on to my parenthesis lines. Always a treat to read. Thank you!
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March 10, 2016 at 11:23 AM
What kind of earth that's the beautiful question. And one thing i loved much that is ....but a time to rise to measure our worth. Beautiful pen my lovely friend, bl
Hicks Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 12:14 AM
Thanks for your insightful feedback, BL. A joy to read.
Delaney Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 2:11 AM
Glad you like Verdigris It is the blue/ green shade that copper ages to when it is in the elements.
Delaney Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Yes that's true. Good observation.
Hicks Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 12:16 AM
I've seen the shade, but was previously unaware of the name. Wasn't the Statue of Liberty made of copper? Is it the color of Verdigris now?
Lindley Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 6:36 PM
" Who can measure our worth? (except the ethereal esophagus) Are we blessed or are we cursed --- dreaming of sarcophagus. We are doomed to fade! We are destined to bloom!" Brilliant verses my friend. A solid 7 and should do very well.
Hicks Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 12:13 AM
Thanks for your continued support, Robert.
Force Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Tim...found your words very poignant in all the writes I read...and yes to respond to one..kicking/screaming coming into the world..I also will leave the same way..... !! I like your take on Life.You obviously live in the real world... keep'em coming...thanks kjforce
Hicks Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 11:50 PM
What a thoughtful comment, my friend. I appreciate your honesty and enthusiasm. Thanks for stopping by.
Callus Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Excellent and very creative, Timothy! A contemplative journey of exploration in which every word and thought come forth in such a natural manner. I don't know the sponsor nor what he's after, but in my opinion this should be a most worthy winner. // paul
Hicks Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Thanks Paul. Happy to know when thoughts are natural rather than forced :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 4:09 PM
you are SO GOOD with these challenges, Gosh, Tim, if this does not make his list, i will be surprised. He does not select many winners, but I think you have a good chance!!
Hicks Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:22 AM
Your enthusiasm is exciting for me, Andrea. The challenges are a great pool of inspiration for me ... glad you liked my poem :)
Delaney Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Love where your thoughts travel....the image of angels weaving ...I can see leaves the color of verdigris. Glad you are remaining prolific. Loved, always, SuZ
Hicks Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:21 AM
Verdigris ... what a beautiful shade and a new word (yet again) that I've never heard before. Thanks for the visits and lovely comments as always, Suz.
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March 7, 2016 at 11:00 AM
This is a fantastic write, Timothy. That ethereal esophagus got to me...and how you rhymed it with sarcophagus. Good one there. This has a carpe diem feel to it. A chance to contemplate where we've come from and where we are going. Great write, dear. You are SO talented. Hugs
Hicks Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:19 AM
Thanks Eileen! I was kinda proud of that phrase you pointed out. I changed the poem type to Carpe Diem ... it's more fitting, I think, so thank you. Your visits and comments are always a pleasure :)
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