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Elegy To a Family House

Why should I remain a family house If I am dilapidated, shattered and tattered In this summer of old age. Why should I remain a family house If the house garden bears a barren look Tearing away its leaves and flowers. Why should I remain a family house If the birds do not build their nests Migrating to some other places. Why should I remain a family house If I don’t have to wait for birds’ return In the lonely colorless evenings. Why should I remain a family house If the inhabitants are in the outhouses Dangling like a jaundiced curtains. Why should I remain a family house If I am not cheered by the chirping And joyful songs of my little birds
+++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date 17-1-14 Dr. Ram Mehta Form: Elegiac Form Third Place Win Contest: Loneliness by Frank H. This is an autobiographical poem. I wrote this poem in the year 2000 when the last of my children left for Canada and USA.

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Date: 2/2/2014 4:52:00 AM
Babies burping should be added and also remove "A" before jaundiced. Other than those two things using some of my vernacular, I think that your poem is spectacular and volume is totally out of sight and now I will have to write morning, noon and night. Jim Horn What is the time difference between here and there?
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Date: 1/28/2014 6:43:00 AM
Awe, that's sad. But I know the feeling. I was expressing something similar with my poem "Improvements," the first one I posted on PoetrySoup. I like the alliteration and assonance.
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Date: 1/19/2014 4:10:00 AM
One can feel the pain of separation in this poem. Thanks for your kind visits to my poems.
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Date: 1/18/2014 7:46:00 PM
A wonderful write with a great message loved it my fellow souper, thank you for the congrads. cheri
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Date: 1/18/2014 10:30:00 AM
Yes, Dr. Ram very nice. Some native american lore thinks the trees and other non human things have souls or gods of sorts. They could tap ino their power by prayer and other ritual.
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Date: 1/18/2014 9:31:00 AM
excellent piece beautifully crafted
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Date: 1/18/2014 4:30:00 AM
VERY NICE POEM! thanks for all your visits and hope to see you visit and comment on my new poem crossroads.Thanks and bye for now.
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Date: 1/18/2014 3:42:00 AM
I love how you were inspired by the empty nest syndrome here. You did a great job with such a poem. Interestingly, that is when MY kids left the house too. right before 2000.
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