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Elegy On An Autumn Day

Change comes sometime late August, a mellow presence to the day; a gentle sun, supplying friendship, joins me walking in the lane. Between defiant borders, autumn's late bloomers-- proud yellow, maroon, and red-- Queen Anne's lace adds frilly softness against weed hardness, a smiling feminine face. The gardens yield their richness, spilling ripe bounty from over laden arms. Peaceful is the attitude autumn offers; a tender sadness shapes the edge where silent stone markers gently gather beneath trees' reverent, flame-haloed heads. The year is slowly dying . . . not fast gone like these quietly remembered, my beloved dead. Copyright, September 10, 2014

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Date: 3/27/2022 9:47:00 PM
"a gentle sun, supplying friendship, joins me walking in the lane" - Very beautiful. Whole poem is a painting. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/28/2014 11:33:00 PM
I think yours is one that I would love to have seen much higher on the list . I remember how much I loved it the first time. This is splendid! and congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 12/28/2014 11:47:00 AM
Congrats on the win Faye...huggs
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Date: 12/28/2014 11:08:00 AM
such wonderful imagery this is a delight to read - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/28/2014 10:17:00 AM
Nice win, Lady.. thank you for the support... PD
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:39:00 AM
oh my, what a gorgeous poem. And how you worked it as an elegy with the stones at the end of the beloved dead. I just love all the imagery in it and especially the walking with the sun. Sun is my best friend too and I hate when I see him go. yes, this is the time when you can just feel the change all around. LOVE this.
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Date: 9/11/2014 10:51:00 AM
Oh this is superb,,you are so observant of what is around you,,and your poetry speaks so loudly, just love this
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Date: 9/11/2014 2:08:00 AM
mellow, mellow!.. breathing in the autumnal mood with queen anne's lace on my hair.. lovely!.. huggs
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