Elegy On An Autumn Day

Change comes sometime late August, 
a mellow presence to the day;
a gentle sun, supplying friendship, 
joins me walking in the lane.
Between defiant borders, autumn's late bloomers--
proud yellow, maroon, and red--
Queen Anne's lace adds frilly softness against weed hardness, 
a smiling  feminine face.
The gardens yield their richness, 
spilling ripe bounty from over laden arms.

Peaceful is the attitude autumn offers; 
a tender sadness shapes the edge
where silent stone markers gently gather 
beneath trees' reverent, flame-haloed heads.
The year is slowly dying . . . 
not fast gone like these quietly remembered, 
my beloved dead.

Copyright, September 10, 2014
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Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 9:47 PM
"a gentle sun, supplying friendship, joins me walking in the lane" - Very beautiful. Whole poem is a painting. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:33 PM
I think yours is one that I would love to have seen much higher on the list . I remember how much I loved it the first time. This is splendid! and congrats on the winners' list.
Kayode Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Congrats on the win Faye...huggs
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:08 AM
such wonderful imagery this is a delight to read - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
A   Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Nice win, Lady.. thank you for the support... PD
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 1:39 AM
oh my, what a gorgeous poem. And how you worked it as an elegy with the stones at the end of the beloved dead. I just love all the imagery in it and especially the walking with the sun. Sun is my best friend too and I hate when I see him go. yes, this is the time when you can just feel the change all around. LOVE this.
Horsman Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 10:51 AM
Oh this is superb,,you are so observant of what is around you,,and your poetry speaks so loudly, just love this
Onclaud Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 2:08 AM
mellow, mellow!.. breathing in the autumnal mood with queen anne's lace on my hair.. lovely!.. huggs
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