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Elegy

The feathery whites descend gently, pale sheet over memories They cover her resting figure, buried deep, deep, her voice Colorless feathers weave themselves together. Before her heart ceased beating, they encase in evergreen her quiet, soothed breather They erase her trace per request, even when they overheard, her silent prayer: Before the funeral’s over... let the bluebirds sprinkle my name over the water

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Date: 7/22/2025 9:37:00 AM
Wow! This is like a prayer! Your words build to a crescendo. Love the feathery whites, pale sheets, then colorless feathers then you gift us evergreen! Love those last lines! Fave! I could definitely read this again!
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 7/22/2025 9:56:00 AM
Thank you, Kim<3 I'm glad you like it

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