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My mom, sister Jenny, me and my stepdad (about six years before the terrible disease Alzheimer's stole his life. I believe this was their 35th anniversary back around 1999.)

Eldon's Way With Words

My step dad, Eldon, long since passed away,
was known for some expressions he would say.
like when he was in traffic and in back
of some bad drivers. Then he’d call them “ Jack.”

Sarcastically, to make us laugh, he’d spout:
“I don’t have all day, Jack; just back it out!”
Of course, those “Jacks” would never hear him say
those snide remarks. We girls laughed anyway.

Those few rare times my sisters and I got
together with our husbands, we could not
refrain from talking in our stepdad's way.
One spouse can mimic well things Dad would say.

My youngest sister has a husband, Kyle,
and his impersonations make us smile.
His “Eldon” style and tone are really keen,
especially when he says real slow. . . “Nowwww, Jean.”

“Now, Jean” was Eldon’s catch-phrase for our mom
when trying to console her. It caught on!
When I’m a bit upset, my husband might
say to me “Now Jean” to keep it light.

It’s pretty cool to think when you’ve passed on,
your funny phrases aren’t completely gone.
I hope my dad is looking down to see
amusing words stayed in our memory!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 12:53 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Great story, congrats Andrea!
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:06 AM
:-) Andrea, congratulations on your win! It's nice to remember our loved ones that have passed in those special things and comments they have left us.
Kimathi Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 2:00 AM
I saw myself back in 1999 as I read your verse and looked at your family photo.... A really beautiful work of art! Congrats for your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)
A  Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 11:56 AM
A wonderful write Andrea, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
Garg Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 5:46 AM
Dads are like that only.... congrats on your Top Win............. hugs
Tunick Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 3:46 AM
If I were Eldon looking down, I'd be very proud and very pleased.
Johnson Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:03 PM
You made him so real to all of us. Congratulations. Joyce
May Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 6:58 PM
I like how the family used those sayings in an endearing way...lovely tribute and a lovely picture too
May Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 5:43 PM
You must have some wonderful memories Andrea and such a gorgeous picture of you all:-) hugs Jan xx
Konos Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:04 PM
Lovely step dad and look how beautiful you are Andrea....truly a lovely poem to treasure....
George   Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Andrea, I love the light heartedness of this, I feel I know him...you created his character so well. bfn Elain
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 3:10 PM
I am so happy to see this poem get top honors Andrea. It is beautifully written and touches the heart. Congrats on your wonderful win.
Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 9:17 PM
I still have my Dad & for sure his funny stories will live on. He's a writer too but I can't convince him to join Soup? Congrad's on your winning verse. Light & Love
Nehls Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 8:20 AM
Wonderful story about your stepdad, Andrea. Nice to have those kind of fond memories. Very well thought out and crafted. You're a fine poet and it's always a pleasure to read your stuff..... Robert.
Smith Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Congrats! Andrea!.. So true.. I am constantly saying, "As Granny would say." Or this one or that one... Awesome win my friend... Arlene
A   Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 10:18 PM
Nice win ... PD
Onclaud Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 7:30 PM
you dan really tell an appealing story, andie... warming my heart as i send your my congrats!.. huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:15 PM
Another great pen Andrea ! Loving tribute to dad ,, congrats on top win !
Wilson Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 9:23 AM
This is a very loving tribute to Eldon Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win...love, Deb
Sietesantos Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on another great win! - A loving sweet tribute to your Dad!
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 10:48 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, andrea
Lindley Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:36 PM
My friend, Congrats on your win!!!! My dad used to say when we boys did something wrong or forgot something, "You boys would forget your own head if it wasn't glued on"! Now I often say that to my darling wife, she just laughs at me...
Gibson Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 7:19 PM
Congratulations, Andrea. Those little phrases are so endearing. "Well, well..." is one of ours. It is funny how they pass from one generation to another and sometimes the people who use the phrases do not recognize that they are parroting someone else.
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April 21, 2012 at 5:21 AM
Takes me back a bit does this wonderful reminder, of the old characters and their sayings, you know Andrea, when i read awesome poems like this, it sure does bridge the gap between our two cultures, U.S and us from the UK have a lot in common. especially when we delve into our past. harry
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