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Eileenette- a Woman Turned Angel

You gently touch these wings, enable me to fly An angel now upon your scented breath I soar In splendid sky the freedom of your love I claim You spread your wings below me as you hover nigh On cushioned clouds I’m laid and loved up to the core In airborne tryst to sun I moan and chant your name Fly nigh to me Soar to my core Claim now my name You gently touch these wings, enable me to fly You spread your wings below me as you hover nigh An angel now upon your scented breath I soar On cushioned clouds I’m laid and loved up to the core In splendid sky the freedom of your love I claim In airborne tryst to sun I moan and chant your name ~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~ A woman turned to angel by your love transformed Watch as I rule the sky, my life by you conformed ~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~ Eileen Manassian Ghali PS...I do have a blog up on this form. Please, if you do have a chance, give it a read and leave your comments there. Help me to achieve my dream of having a form named after me. If only I could realize it....it would bring so much joy to my life. Thank you for being SOUPER FRIENDS! :)

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Date: 12/29/2014 9:26:00 AM
I like Jerry's Comment!
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Date: 8/31/2014 8:45:00 AM
This place is a goldmine of talent, I have just found another brilliant poet. Just Don't let it go to your head....lol. Richard is right, I will be reading much more of your work
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Date: 4/1/2014 7:26:00 AM
You were flying long before we met. I enjoyed rereading this one.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 7:28:00 AM
Richard....You have often been like wind beneath my wings for you have always encouraged me to keep trying and to achieve. I thank you.
Date: 3/25/2014 10:22:00 AM
This is a very beautiful poem...presented beautifully too....and I'm looking for that blog...I want to try one for your form....I can't find the blog yet....still looking....
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 10:33:00 AM
Hello, MD. Thanks for coming by to visit and for looking for my blog. It is a ways down on the blog list...the title? Eileenette: Woman turned Angel (transformation). Love you so much. Hugs.
Date: 3/25/2014 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your new form Eilee.This poem sprinkles serenity dear friend..Very angelic feeling indeed...and that scented breath so romantic.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thanks, sweetie. Don't know if it is going to fly or not, but at least I'm trying. Thank you for your encouragement. I need it. Hugs
Date: 3/24/2014 2:00:00 AM
This is lovely Eileen. I did visit your blog and I hope this is the form that will help you realize your dream. I really like the name you gave this form too. Congratulations on your creation!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 10:35:00 AM
Thanks for your encouragement on this new form, Connie. I'm so glad that you liked it. I don't know if it will fly, but at least I'm trying. Hugs
Date: 3/23/2014 6:54:00 PM
enjoyed your blog and the beautiful love poem, Eileen. You take off now and SOAR!!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 10:36:00 AM
I will try to soar, Andrea...I need wind beneath my wings. Hugs
Date: 3/23/2014 1:49:00 PM
- Whatever "form" ..... it's a beautiful poem, dear Eileen! - Hope your weekend has been great. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2014 10:20:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine! I'm so sorry I didn't get to this sooner! Thank you for bring me warmth.
Date: 3/23/2014 10:23:00 AM
I believe you were born an angel my dear. Simply lovely, a transcendent piece. Hugs Rick
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 10:31:00 AM
Well, Rick, your comment certainly does help me fly...Thank you. :) I have a blog up on this. Thanks for your visit! hugs

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