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Eighty-Six Thousand Four Hundred

Eighty-Six Thousand Four Hundred Iye! Another day And from the blink of sleep From the cosset of sheets The incessant alarm pulls my feet Iye! Another day And the sun has conveyed splintered shadows through the trees To dapple my wits with the even darker The broadside of purpose waking Twenty-four hours for repeating And strange it seems how beauty is lost Not one single enterprise to change belief The daily eating of my heart Numb and chilled through emptiness Iye! Another day Born with a slit throat and choked deliverance Hollow soul to hollow life Witness to nothing but splintered moment Silence Desperate quiet unreachable silence And so it seems this thin blood This weak and paltry empathy for fate This ritual of eighty-six thousand four hundred Iye! Another day For the isolation of movement to beckon And batter its tide on my dreams Only to transport another useless day To its inevitable conclusion I lay and shy with the predominant why Why should I For the courage and fortitude of ordinary people Is but control to the denizens of the animal political And my loneliness but a rumour to vacant ears And in the eighty-six thousand four hundred The speech of denial records that it has lost all faith in me Iye! Another day Another day to deserted hope Another day of discarded love Another day of futile intimacy To pull me from my cocoon of sleep And thirty one thousand five hundred and thirty six thousand For us to keep

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Date: 4/21/2009 9:06:00 AM
I like the unique turns of phrase, as in "And the sun has conveyed splintered shadows through the trees To dapple my wits...I lay and shy with the predominant why...Another day of futile intimacy To pull me from my cocoon of sleep And thirty one thousand five hundred and thirty six thousand For us to keep" Congrats on the feature
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Date: 4/21/2009 7:50:00 AM
Time drags when we count the seconds. Congrats on being featured. I like your title better than the TV show's "24." God Bless. Vince
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Date: 4/21/2009 6:22:00 AM
Fantastic and epic in scope, Colin, no doubt why you're featured this week! Fantastic work! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/21/2009 12:37:00 AM
Time. it feels so daunting when you look at it as such, despite it being infinitive.....congratulations on this piece being featured this week, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/20/2009 8:53:00 PM
Hi Colin, no comment. Congratulations on your featured poetry. Mine is also featured this week.Ernilando
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Date: 4/20/2009 10:36:00 AM
Oh, I was thinking it is how many hours you have lived? Am I close? Anyway, this makes me sad Colin. Congrats on your featured weekly write. : ) Well deserved as always. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/19/2009 9:49:00 PM
Colin, congrats on being featured this week, nice work...Raul
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Date: 4/19/2009 6:25:00 PM
I'm am left in a daze wondering what the numbers mean, I am glad I don't feel like I'm the only one left out of the loop...Very intriguing indeed...Awesome piece here from a very creative and gifted artist..Your work leaves me stunned.Congratulations on this lovely piece being featured this week. GB and Best Wishes Always, Tyesha
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Date: 4/19/2009 4:55:00 PM
Even if you have left some of us puzzled for the meaning behind the words....it is so apparent that you are extremely talented, a gifted writer...I'm in awe of your work each time. Congratulations on being featured...well deserved! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/19/2009 2:59:00 PM
numerically dyslexic.. what can I say
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Date: 4/19/2009 10:16:00 AM
Colin - Like Christie the numbers at the ending lost me - Enjoyed the read non-the-less - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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