Eighty-Six Thousand Four Hundred

Eighty-Six Thousand Four Hundred

Iye! Another day
And from the blink of sleep
From the cosset of sheets
The incessant alarm pulls my feet
Iye! Another day
And the sun has conveyed splintered shadows through the trees
To dapple my wits with the even darker
The broadside of purpose waking
Twenty-four hours for repeating

And strange it seems how beauty is lost
Not one single enterprise to change belief
The daily eating of my heart
Numb and chilled through emptiness
Iye! Another day
Born with a slit throat and choked deliverance
Hollow soul to hollow life
Witness to nothing but splintered moment
Silence
Desperate quiet unreachable silence

And so it seems this thin blood
This weak and paltry empathy for fate
This ritual of eighty-six thousand four hundred
Iye! Another day
For the isolation of movement to beckon
And batter its tide on my dreams
Only to transport another useless day
To its inevitable conclusion 
I lay and shy with the predominant why
Why should I

For the courage and fortitude of ordinary people
Is but control to the denizens of the animal political
And my loneliness but a rumour to vacant ears
And in the eighty-six thousand four hundred
The speech of denial records that it has lost all faith in me
Iye! Another day
Another day to deserted hope
Another day of discarded love
Another day of futile intimacy
To pull me from my cocoon of sleep  
And  thirty one thousand five hundred and thirty six thousand
For us to keep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 4/21/2009 9:06:00 AM
I like the unique turns of phrase, as in "And the sun has conveyed splintered shadows through the trees To dapple my wits...I lay and shy with the predominant why...Another day of futile intimacy To pull me from my cocoon of sleep And thirty one thousand five hundred and thirty six thousand For us to keep" Congrats on the feature
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Date: 4/21/2009 7:50:00 AM
Time drags when we count the seconds. Congrats on being featured. I like your title better than the TV show's "24." God Bless. Vince
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Date: 4/21/2009 6:22:00 AM
Fantastic and epic in scope, Colin, no doubt why you're featured this week! Fantastic work! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/21/2009 12:37:00 AM
Time. it feels so daunting when you look at it as such, despite it being infinitive.....congratulations on this piece being featured this week, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/20/2009 8:53:00 PM
Hi Colin, no comment. Congratulations on your featured poetry. Mine is also featured this week.Ernilando
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Date: 4/20/2009 10:36:00 AM
Oh, I was thinking it is how many hours you have lived? Am I close? Anyway, this makes me sad Colin. Congrats on your featured weekly write. : ) Well deserved as always. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/19/2009 9:49:00 PM
Colin, congrats on being featured this week, nice work...Raul
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Date: 4/19/2009 6:25:00 PM
I'm am left in a daze wondering what the numbers mean, I am glad I don't feel like I'm the only one left out of the loop...Very intriguing indeed...Awesome piece here from a very creative and gifted artist..Your work leaves me stunned.Congratulations on this lovely piece being featured this week. GB and Best Wishes Always, Tyesha
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Date: 4/19/2009 4:55:00 PM
Even if you have left some of us puzzled for the meaning behind the words....it is so apparent that you are extremely talented, a gifted writer...I'm in awe of your work each time. Congratulations on being featured...well deserved! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/19/2009 2:59:00 PM
numerically dyslexic.. what can I say
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Date: 4/19/2009 10:16:00 AM
Colin - Like Christie the numbers at the ending lost me - Enjoyed the read non-the-less - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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