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Eight Lines of Spooky

She felt an invisible hand go up her back when she turned sleepy. If she had not been sitting alone it would have been less creepy. Her familiar, Poindexter hissed, screeched and ran off…validation. It took every ounce of her strength to stay but with tribulation. What do you want? She asked the entity whom she could not see. There was no answer except for a fierce grip that held her down tight. Halloween night always brought ghouls ghosts and goblins to thee. Dog barked and ran off too, a sure sign it was going to be a rough night. Written 10-27-2020 Contest: 8 Lines of Spooky Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 11/11/2020 12:03:00 PM
I've got chills Caren. I stepped right into this experience through your vivid imagery and expert story telling! Congratulations on your very well deserved win!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/11/2020 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Sam
Date: 11/6/2020 11:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest, Caren ... scary enough for me :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/7/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Date: 11/6/2020 10:37:00 AM
Caren, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/7/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Constance
Date: 11/5/2020 1:38:00 PM
Caren, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky tale!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/6/2020 1:33:00 AM
Thank you Tania! I appreciate it.

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