Eidolon

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Oct. 14, 2023 12.00noon

A cadaver’s revenge, bleeds eyes at every clench, A forever nightmare, hunting souls everywhere.

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/14/2023 2:19:00 PM

Fine Alexandrine for Halloween season, Len. Very good for a short poem, my kind friend. Have a fun October! Hugs, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2023 4:53:00 PM

Have a fun October too my dear poet friend Bill. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words. God bless you always.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/14/2023 1:58:00 AM

eek this is creepy Len! hugs jan xx

Len Gasun
Date: 10/14/2023 7:21:00 AM

I wrote a creepy one for the coming Halloween celebration my dear poet friend Jan. Thank you so much for reading my poem and leaving comments that'll inspire me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs