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From a mouthful of this morning’s eggs,
I pull bits of char from yesterday’s breakfast.
‘I had no chance to scrub the pan’, I plea with myself-
But I still smash it over my skull
like a cartoon.

Every morning I wake up 
feeling last night’s feelings,
thinking last night’s thoughts,
about what’s happening 10 years ago, 
and what happened tomorrow.

If you add up every 
I fight through- 
just to say:

‘i love you’

It would stretch for longer than I’ve known you,
which is longer than I’ve been alive.

There was no ‘today’ in my broken egg. 
No difference between coming or going,
to an automaton in purgatory 
who saw life through the pinhole eyes 
of a cardboard mask won at a birthday party 
I never asked for.
The sky looked like the ceiling of a small, dark closet.
and flowers looked like plastic bargain bin decor 
coated in lead paint, the kind left on roadside graves.
I used to count those as a child,
on the way to destinations 
I still dread my arrival to.

If I were brave enough to show you my awe and my terror
of loving the one who revealed 
the world as something real, all this time-

I would sink face down in dirty bathwater 
choking on wet, laughing sobs
until my fingerprints wrinkled away
and tear at my clammy skin 
until my soft nails bent backward
and paint red bruises all over my trembling body
that would spell out a primitive language 
neither of us had the chance to learn. 

This is my best guess:

‘i am just a bad thing that happened
a book of false memories and blind feelings. 
You are a very fast reader,
You’ll soon reach the end of me.’

I remember drawing a map in crayon 
of every ditch I saw myself lying in
strange, unnatural positions.
Like I'd been struck by a car,
and someone shoved my body away
so I wouldn’t mess up the next one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 8/2/2017 9:33:00 AM
So emotional!.....I felt like crying!....Tis too self-degrading....well i understand...
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Adeyemi Joshua
Date: 8/4/2017 2:05:00 PM
It's a really nice write up!...Cool!
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Meadow Kurova
Date: 8/2/2017 2:45:00 PM
I'm glad to hear my poem was moving. I hope you feel better, and I suggest venting those feelings with writing, that helped me a lot.
Date: 7/26/2017 11:56:00 AM
This is fantastic, welcome to poetrysoup.
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Meadow Kurova
Date: 7/26/2017 4:24:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 7/26/2017 8:47:00 AM
This is very good indeed, Eden - Impressed! Keep up the excellent work. All the best...And - Welcome to the "Soup"! :) john
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Meadow Kurova
Date: 7/26/2017 4:24:00 PM
Thanks! Appreciate it.
Date: 7/26/2017 8:06:00 AM
Deep agony felt in this piece Eden, very well crafted with strong images that we all can relate to. Keep up the good work.
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Meadow Kurova
Date: 7/26/2017 6:32:00 PM
Appreciate that, it feels good to be heard.