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Edvard Munch, The Woman and the Bear

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"show me your face" growls subside upon revelation does your countenance veil mine? I see beyond sight and temporality still full of sorrow, though drawn in indisputably realised in your embrace no knowledge of how long I'd been adrift but right here, now, I cling to you I hold this moment with tenderness the essence of everything I crave to entrust myself to this gentle mercy reflections of purity and grace, together yet I'm unaltered, how could this be! "change me" I plead in a thousand ways "I don't wish to" you reply again and again a curse of consciousness felt as abandonment lost in the sorrow of perpetual self I yearn to drift out of focus wish to be without features oblivion rejects me, I cannot forget myself this waltz and spiral in time unequivocally bound yet offset form and substance always at odds a guilt laden mismatch of wasted lives layer by layer I seek to disappear ashamed of my self pity and flaws but forever in echoes, I was there for one second of eternity, existing in your arms

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Date: 4/5/2024 9:57:00 PM
Just a brilliant poem DD, thoroughly enthralled from beginning to end. In my humble view, one of your best. This poem obviously welled up from a deep place...so pleased it surfaced here to be shared and to be given the chance to read. And the gift further enhanced by a lovely reading, your voice so moving.
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Date: 4/6/2024 4:34:00 AM
Thank you Paul, I woke up in the early hours because it's stormy here and as you know I'm always inspired by Munch's art. I didn't stick around long enough to perfect it but did put in a bit of editing time. Thank you for high praise x

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