Edit Marks
Yes now this odd write:
Rough draft in plain sight,
Cryptic thoughts lifts cite,
Shady tints take flight.
The work scripts odd stuff:
Sense craft in nude pose,
Feel gaps just enough,
Splurge in succinct dose.
Let the red ink glide:
Edit for clear flow,
Crisp strokes as marks slide,
Reach of better show.
No easy write here:
Awkward the loose change,
Edit to make clear,
Groom finesse not strange.
Red ink stains sculpt well:
Final edit blooms,
Floral fragrance dwells,
A clever write zooms.
So here the take sells:
Flair and style reveal,
Easy read script gels,
Fate now casts last feel.
To make each write good:
Craft and edit well,
Sync with sanguine mood,
Let final work tell.
Leon Enriquez
06 September 2018
Singapore
Copyright © Leon Enriquez | Year Posted 2018
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