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Eddy the Elephant

Eddy was a very young elephant so there was much he had yet to learn. One day, Eddy felt sad because all his young animal friends could play instruments that made glorious sounds, while he, it seemed, could not. Try as he might, each note Eddy tried to blow on his friend's instruments, came out flat. Eddy went in search of his Mother. One of the things Eddy had already learned was that his Mother could cheer him up and he longed to be cheered. He found his Mother under a very tall, shading tree, chatting with her friends. “Mother, why is music so pleasing?” asked little Eddy. “Music is a gift,” replied his Mother; “That brings us joy,” said Ms. Zebra; “That eases our spirits,” added Ms. Monkey; “And makes us smile,” finished Ms. Tiger. Eddy did not feel cheered, in fact, he felt even sadder. He began to walk. Eddy thought, “I cannot play an instrument like others, so I must not have the gift of bringing joy, or the ability to ease other’s spirits and make them smile. I must not be of any good to anyone.” Eddy was so busy walking and thinking that he failed to notice the sun was leaving the sky. He even forgot his Mother worried if he was not home by dark. After a while, Eddy became tired. He flopped down by a pond and fell asleep. “Rivet, rivet”, chorused in Eddy’s ears. The constant sound woke him up. Opening one tired eye, Eddy observed the water. He saw frogs sitting on lily pads and lifted his head. He noticed that when a frog's mouth moved, the music, “rivet, rivet” could be heard. Suddenly, Eddy felt a need to move. He heard his own inner-voice telling him to get up and join the melody. Not sure what he would do, Eddy stood, lifted his trunk and blew out of it with as much force as a wee elephant can. He heard a wondrous, trombone-roar that filled the night. Full of excitement, Eddy ran home in search of his Mother. Though Eddy was a baby elephant, he was still quite large and the every tree seemed to shake as he ran. His Mother heard the “clomp, clomp” from his running and began to run herself to meet him. The other female animals sensed the Mother’s relief and became so excited that they also ran to greet Eddy. “Mother, oh, Mother, I am my very own gift of joy. I can ease spirits and bring smiles. I don’t need an instrument. Just listen, Mother, listen”, said Eddy as he lifted his trunk and sounded off another mighty note. “Oh, Eddy, indeed you are, and always have been,” said his happy Mother. All the animals were so excited about Eddy’s discovery that they had a big parade the next morning. Even the frogs came. When the young animal’s marching band went by, Eddy could be seen and heard, sharing the gift of his own special music.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/24/2025 5:17:00 PM
That is really cute, Caycay. I wish to have seen. Moral at the end,! Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 3/24/2025 6:59:00 AM
CayCay this is the sweetest tale ever! I think children would love it! Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 3/24/2025 6:39:00 AM
Very cute story and example of a fable... I'm so happy you entered the contest! Xo
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Date: 5/8/2016 10:37:00 AM
A well writen and facinating childrens' story. Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 5/8/2016 5:43:00 AM
This goes to show that we all have our own special talents! Enjoyed this lovely story, CayCay; wait till my g'daughter reads it...she'll love it! ~ I see that congrats are in order...well done! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/8/2016 4:38:00 AM
Congrats CayCay, for your top placement with this awesome story!! ;-)
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Date: 5/8/2016 2:52:00 AM
A wonderful story CayCay many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/8/2016 1:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this touching story
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Date: 5/8/2016 12:34:00 AM
Hi CayCay, This is a wonderful story! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 5/7/2016 10:11:00 PM
What an uplifting, delightful story. Our gifts can be right under our noses, and the joy they can bring us can be shared with others. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/7/2016 1:55:00 PM
Congrats CayCay! Sweet story!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/7/2016 6:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Balveen ... CayCay
Date: 5/7/2016 1:13:00 PM
CayCay, congrats on your placement in the contest! very cute!!! Be blessed :)-luloo
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/7/2016 6:50:00 PM
Blessings to you as well. Thank you for commenting and making 'cute.' Take good care ... CayCay
Date: 5/7/2016 12:48:00 PM
I loved your heartwarmng tale CayCay! It would have been my pick. I will read it to my four year old g.daughter Carissa. Congratulations on your third placement. #7. ; )
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/7/2016 12:59:00 PM
I loved your story - let us admire each other! Thank you for such uplifting comments. I will read mine to my son when he visits in June - even though he is 31! Sweet, sweet Connie - thank you and all the best ... CayCay
Date: 5/7/2016 11:15:00 AM
Excellent children's story, CayCay! So happy to see it on the podium! Congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/7/2016 11:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra. All the best ... CayCay

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