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Eclipse of the Moon

Tonight I searched the starry skies looking for the moon In the umbra of the Earth it's lunar limbs were strewn Rays of light were dripping reflecting off the sea A glimpse of heaven was what I saw shining down on me I hadn't seen such a sight since your vision in my dreams Those soft brown eyes that killer smile hair flowing like the streams In the distance a falling star is sparkling in the night I close my eyes and make a wish that one day you'll be in my sight We'll sing and dance under the starlit skies holding each other tight as we gaze in each other's eyes When the night does come and all our dreams come true You'll be my forever, everlasting, evermore, just me and you

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Date: 12/18/2014 1:21:00 PM
very beautifully painted piece tim excellent pen dear friend
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/18/2014 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Liam my friend...haven't commented much the past few weeks... Super busy at work...much more time after Christmas... Cheers
Date: 12/17/2014 11:14:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Tim, I love the description of the night sky, a 7 sir. Blessings and Merry Christmas
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/18/2014 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Eve my dear friend...hugs Tim
Date: 12/15/2014 8:14:00 AM
Lovely!
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/15/2014 8:36:00 AM
Thank you sir :)
Date: 12/14/2014 5:26:00 PM
I love the way you wrote this Tim, when reading it the words just flow with such harmony that they just roll off the tongue with ease. Very very nicely done, blessings Carl
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Date: 12/14/2014 5:29:00 PM
Thanks Carl..I was inspired by thoughts of my love...cheers
Date: 12/14/2014 11:36:00 AM
Your romantic writes are so beautiful, Tim. This is another lovely write from you.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2014 12:40:00 PM
Thank you for your sweet comment Eileen.... Hugs Tim
Date: 12/14/2014 9:57:00 AM
beautiful:-) hugs jan x
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2014 12:39:00 PM
Thanks Jan......hugs Tim
Date: 12/14/2014 9:21:00 AM
So beautiful this is...Holy Romantic ! Adding it to my fvs.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2014 12:38:00 PM
Thank you Charma sb for the fav....hugs Tim :)
Date: 12/14/2014 12:13:00 AM
Very sweet and romantic. Nicely done!
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Date: 12/14/2014 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Laura....hugs Tim
Date: 12/14/2014 12:07:00 AM
Nice and beautiful poem brother ! I really enjoyed it! :) such beauty and heartfelt, a lunar eclipse like falling in love for the first time.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2014 12:35:00 PM
Thank you my brother... Cheers
Date: 12/14/2014 12:06:00 AM
I like the imagery in your poem and how you intermingle the desire of your heart within the beauty and mystery of a lunar eclipse. Thank you.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2014 12:34:00 PM
Thank you Patricia... Hugs Tim
Date: 12/13/2014 10:45:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2014 12:33:00 PM
Thank you my friend

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